User contributions for Radphilosophe1

24 November 2024

• 14:0014:00, 24 November 2024 diff hist +10 m Between the Buttons →Personnel: added "theremin" to Brian Jones instruments played, in line with change I made to first paragraph.
• 13:5713:57, 24 November 2024 diff hist +33 Between the Buttons →top: added important information that Brian Jones played the exotic electronic instrument, the theremin, on "Please Go Home."

14 November 2024

• 05:0805:08, 14 November 2024 diff hist +15 m Performance (film) →Development: made grammar better

5 November 2024

• 10:2610:26, 5 November 2024 diff hist +560 Talk:War of Actium →Number of Antony's ships in Battle of Actium vs. War of Actium: new section current Tag: New topic
• 09:5809:58, 5 November 2024 diff hist +58 m War of Actium →Land campaign: I think these changes make the paragraph more clear and flowing.
• 09:3309:33, 5 November 2024 diff hist +7 m War of Actium →Naval theatre: It makes more sense to place this sentence here rather than at the end of the paragraph.
• 09:1409:14, 5 November 2024 diff hist +3 m Battle of Mutina →top: otherwise this can be read as Antony's forces being a component of the previously named forces, which is confusing current

28 September 2024

• 23:5023:50, 28 September 2024 diff hist +4 m Sofrito →Latin America: 2 minor grammatical changes
• 23:4623:46, 28 September 2024 diff hist 0 m Sofrito →Latin America: minor grammatical edit

26 September 2024

• 06:5606:56, 26 September 2024 diff hist −8 m Zhao–Xiongnu War →Battle
• 06:0806:08, 26 September 2024 diff hist +26 Zhao–Xiongnu War →Defensive approach

24 September 2024

• 18:0118:01, 24 September 2024 diff hist +12 m History of slavery →Americas: small addition for clarification

18 September 2024

• 09:2009:20, 18 September 2024 diff hist +9 m Al-Farabi →al-Farabi, Aristotle, Maimonides: made slight clarification
• 09:0209:02, 18 September 2024 diff hist +3 m Al-Farabi →Psychology: corrected grammar

17 September 2024

• 04:0004:00, 17 September 2024 diff hist 0 m Indo-Aryan peoples →Proto-Indo-Iranians: corrected grammar

13 August 2024

• 12:0612:06, 13 August 2024 diff hist −12 m Latium →Definition: corrected grammar

9 August 2024

• 12:1012:10, 9 August 2024 diff hist 0 m 323 BC →Macedonian Empire: It makes more sense to place Alexander's order to demolish the ziggurat before he dies! Right? current

6 August 2024

• 10:3410:34, 6 August 2024 diff hist +3 m Cenabum →Roman Era: grammatical corrections current

5 August 2024

• 19:3419:34, 5 August 2024 diff hist +6 m Battle of Arcadiopolis (970) →Versions of what happened: grammatical corrections
• 19:3019:30, 5 August 2024 diff hist +3 m Battle of Arcadiopolis (970) →Aftermath: provided missing word
• 13:2213:22, 5 August 2024 diff hist 0 m History of the Huns →Invasion of Gaul: this has to be "objective" not "objection"

18 July 2024

• 11:4811:48, 18 July 2024 diff hist +410 Out of Darkness (2022 film) →Plot: some clarifications

17 May 2024

• 06:3506:35, 17 May 2024 diff hist −4 m King Philip's War →Historical context: corrected grammar by changing Native's to Natives (since it isn't supposed to be grammatically possessive)
• 06:2606:26, 17 May 2024 diff hist +35 m Pequot War →Historical accounts and controversies: if they are important enough to be adopted by contemporary Pequots, their names should be mentioned in the text
• 06:1206:12, 17 May 2024 diff hist +62 m Pequot War →Causes for war: minor changes for clarifiation

16 May 2024

• 03:0203:02, 16 May 2024 diff hist +2 m James VI and I →Rule in Scotland: corrected grammar and made clarication

8 May 2024

• 18:3718:37, 8 May 2024 diff hist 0 m Tatars →Crimean Tatars: clarified meanig

28 April 2024

• 20:5420:54, 28 April 2024 diff hist +3 m Battle of Legnano →Frederick Barbarossa in Cairate: changed "contemporary" to "contemporaneous" to clarify meaning.

27 April 2024

• 10:2410:24, 27 April 2024 diff hist +89 m Magnolia (film) →Plot: Otherwise this is ambiguous; it could be read as Jim is climbing the pole. (several small changes for clarity)

24 April 2024

• 06:5006:50, 24 April 2024 diff hist +19 m Seven Sages of Greece →The Seven Sages: He was the first well-known Greek philosopher, period; not just the first one of Phoenician descent.

19 April 2024

• 03:5303:53, 19 April 2024 diff hist +8 m Fernwood 2 Night →Overview and production: corrected grammar
• 03:1103:11, 19 April 2024 diff hist −4 m The Outsider (miniseries) →Episodes: corrected grammar

10 March 2024

• 21:0121:01, 10 March 2024 diff hist 0 m Satsuma Rebellion →Aftermath: Just to improve the logical flow of the paragraph.

20 January 2024

• 14:0414:04, 20 January 2024 diff hist +29 m David Hilbert →top: I just added Karl Gustav to Other Notable Students on the side bar since he is mentioned as such in the main text.

17 January 2024

• 11:4911:49, 17 January 2024 diff hist 0 m James L. Dolan →Intuit Dome/L.A. Forum dispute: corrected grammar

24 December 2023

• 00:3600:36, 24 December 2023 diff hist +1,592 Talk:Tengrism →Last sentence of section "Tengrism and Christianity" needs to be made more clear: new section Tag: New topic

21 December 2023

• 18:3418:34, 21 December 2023 diff hist +34 m Battle of Adwa →Immediate aftermath: corrected grammar, etc.

16 December 2023

• 14:3414:34, 16 December 2023 diff hist +13 Napoleonic Wars →Background: The original wording was "to curtail the growing unrest in France." But surely the allies of the First Coalition were much more concerned to curtail the growing power of France, and its anti-Monarchial ideology. Right?
• 13:4413:44, 16 December 2023 diff hist +19 m Battle of Hodów →Battle: change for greater clarity

12 December 2023

• 16:1016:10, 12 December 2023 diff hist +21 m Antiochus IV Epiphanes →Historiography: I think this phrasing makes more sense, on re-reading this paragraph.

11 December 2023

• 20:5420:54, 11 December 2023 diff hist +8 m The Assassin Next Door →Plot: This is to make sure a casual reader doesn't assume it is the Italian or Italian-America mafia being spoken of.

8 December 2023

• 01:4501:45, 8 December 2023 diff hist +21 Antiochus IV Epiphanes →Historiography: Consider the last part of this sentence: “…stories such as those of Antiochus IV frolicking with commoners at taverns may have soured his reputation in antiquity in a way that modern values would find unobjectionable.” The natural interpretation of this part of this sentence would be that modern values would find unobjectionable the souring of Antiochus IV’s reputation in antiquity (merely on the basis of his déclassé behavior such as frolicking with commoners in taverns).

2 December 2023

• 17:5617:56, 2 December 2023 diff hist +1 m Category theory →top: this comma (sources,) is needed to avoid syntactical ambiguity

27 November 2023

• 03:3303:33, 27 November 2023 diff hist −1 m Micronation →Definition: grammatical correction
• 03:3203:32, 27 November 2023 diff hist −1 m Micronation →top: grammatical correction

20 November 2023

• 12:2312:23, 20 November 2023 diff hist +2 m Bernard Gui →Works
• 12:1112:11, 20 November 2023 diff hist +24 m Bernard Gui →Biography
• 12:0312:03, 20 November 2023 diff hist +6 m Albigensian Crusade →Influence: otherwise some may take this to refer to legal courts Tag: Reverted
• 11:5211:52, 20 November 2023 diff hist +11 m Albigensian Crusade →French royal intervention
• 11:4511:45, 20 November 2023 diff hist +3 m Albigensian Crusade →Toulouse: corrected grammar