User contributions for NorthCoastReader

19 March 2019

• 02:4502:45, 19 March 2019 diff hist +336 User talk:NorthCoastReader Answer to question posted to this talk page.

11 March 2019

• 02:4402:44, 11 March 2019 diff hist +25 m Chicago Fire season 7 →Cast changes: Relieve kludgy construct.

29 August 2018

• 00:4000:40, 29 August 2018 diff hist −49 m Boeing 314 Clipper Removal of two two many "2017s" - unneeded redundancies.

25 June 2018

• 00:0700:07, 25 June 2018 diff hist +968 Talk:Giant Tiger Brief and minor suggestion that there may be more to the story than meets the eye here.

16 March 2018

• 00:3300:33, 16 March 2018 diff hist −65 Bacardi 151 Unsubstantiated claim displayed with a silly amount of certitude. Remaining stock MAY still be available in Canada. If so, CITE.

2 February 2018

• 01:5201:52, 2 February 2018 diff hist +71 Ohio Division of Liquor Control Begin to rewrite...
• 01:4401:44, 2 February 2018 diff hist +62 m Ohio Division of Liquor Control Change one word to eliminate possible source of baffling confusion. Rework sentence for clarity.

1 December 2017

• 03:4303:43, 1 December 2017 diff hist +49 m GE Evolution Series Supply a Wiki-link to a name baffle-ingly bereft of contextual value.

3 November 2017

• 01:5701:57, 3 November 2017 diff hist +18 m Ohio Fireworks Derecho →Aftermath: Another try at massaging some of the kludginess out of this article.
• 01:3701:37, 3 November 2017 diff hist −40 m North Hollywood shootout →Deaths of the gunmen: Minor clean-up.

28 October 2017

• 01:2301:23, 28 October 2017 diff hist +348 Talk:Wake turbulence category →What makes for a narrow-bodied "heavy.": new section

2 October 2017

• 01:2801:28, 2 October 2017 diff hist +12 m Gaslighting Clarification.

23 September 2017

• 01:0601:06, 23 September 2017 diff hist +18 m De Havilland Dove →Civil operators: Add name of known U.S. operator with WP article of its own.

19 September 2017

• 02:5902:59, 19 September 2017 diff hist 0 m Ohio Division of Liquor Control Update.
• 02:4302:43, 19 September 2017 diff hist −58 Ohio Fireworks Derecho →Aftermath: Repair of kinda kludgy sentence/ ¶ structure.
• 02:1102:11, 19 September 2017 diff hist 0 m 25th Infantry Division (United States) Removal of comma necessitated by previous removal of un-sourced derogatory "nickname." Sorry didn't catch the first time.

13 September 2017

• 02:0302:03, 13 September 2017 diff hist −59 25th Infantry Division (United States) Removed derogatory "nickname" not explained in the article or in the Wiki-linked article.

20 July 2017

• 01:4501:45, 20 July 2017 diff hist −8 m USS Houston (SSN-713) →Service: Too many "following"s at start of adjacent ¶. Eliminate unneeded "did."

11 July 2017

• 02:5602:56, 11 July 2017 diff hist +1 m James Bond →Non-Eon films: Change "at" to "of" which we believe is standard English for expressing this kind of thought plus add a comma to make it all pretty.

23 February 2017

• 02:0402:04, 23 February 2017 diff hist 0 m Irene Adler →Television and radio: Place initials NHK in proper order.

12 May 2016

• 22:0722:07, 12 May 2016 diff hist +1 m SS Ohio (1940) →Construction and launch: The Oxford comma is our friend.
• 00:0700:07, 12 May 2016 diff hist +7 m Cocktail Clarification.

29 March 2016

• 03:4703:47, 29 March 2016 diff hist −13 m Marine One →Current operations: Very minor clean-up and clarification.

14 December 2015

• 01:0601:06, 14 December 2015 diff hist −3 m Standing cell Correct word choice.

13 December 2015

• 02:4402:44, 13 December 2015 diff hist −13 French Foreign Legion →Generals' Putsch 1961 and reduction of Foreign Legion: Removed "that" and "sang" and reformed sentence to readability and sense.

2 December 2015

• 01:4701:47, 2 December 2015 diff hist −1 m Tutankhamun →Health and appearance: Removal of apostrophe which must not be there.
• 00:2900:29, 2 December 2015 diff hist −4 m Psycho (1960 film) →The shower scene: This is a better word choice. Original "acclimatization" more specifically appropriate to issues of adaptation to new or changed climates.

24 September 2015

• 01:1501:15, 24 September 2015 diff hist +9 m American Beauty/American Psycho →Other songs: Add link to "Vevo" and decapitalize all but first letter of that word.

9 September 2015

• 02:3902:39, 9 September 2015 diff hist +832 Talk:Ford Vulcan engine →Use of Vulcan engine in aviation applications: new section

8 September 2015

• 02:1302:13, 8 September 2015 diff hist −1 m Under Fire (Blackwood novel) →Plot Summary: Removal of extra comma and space.
• 02:0102:01, 8 September 2015 diff hist +670 m Talk:EAA AirVenture Oshkosh →Attendance Undue Weight: Opinion expressed.

23 August 2015

• 04:0404:04, 23 August 2015 diff hist +26 Under Fire (Blackwood novel) Minor re-write and rearrangement of commas. Tag: Visual edit
• 03:5303:53, 23 August 2015 diff hist −1 m Under Fire (Blackwood novel) Given the way Mr. C's novels go, Jack Jr. may well be fully blooded but we think the new word choice better.

17 August 2015

• 02:4802:48, 17 August 2015 diff hist +4 m Wake turbulence category Introduce WikiLink to term for easy clarification.
• 02:4302:43, 17 August 2015 diff hist +58 Wake turbulence category Introduce acronym and associated WikiLink in first ¶ and remove from later ¶. Minor edit in first sentence for clarity and style.

17 July 2015

• 00:3100:31, 17 July 2015 diff hist +1 m North Hollywood shootout Supply missing space.

12 July 2015

• 02:1302:13, 12 July 2015 diff hist −2 m Dennis Prager →Career: Minor clean-up. Remove errant comma and correct tense.
• 02:0602:06, 12 July 2015 diff hist −4 m Dennis Prager →Early life and education: Very minor clean-up.

4 July 2015

• 23:3723:37, 4 July 2015 diff hist −4 m Heinen's Change curious edit to something more in keeping with the rest of the article.
• 23:2123:21, 4 July 2015 diff hist +4 m International News Service →History: Supplied missing and much needed "who."

17 June 2015

• 01:5901:59, 17 June 2015 diff hist +49 m Electro-Motive Diesel Clarification was necessary. Not a car but a rail car. Plus WikiLink.

31 May 2015

• 02:5202:52, 31 May 2015 diff hist +4 m Downtown Cleveland →Financial District: Clarity and flow.
• 02:2602:26, 31 May 2015 diff hist −70 Euclid Beach Park →Decline, Closure, and Enduring Reminders: Sentence rewritten to conform to cited material.

27 March 2015

• 00:5900:59, 27 March 2015 diff hist −57 Down Down Baby Remove cite. Cited video clip from movie "Big" is inaccessible. YouTube states: "This video contains content from FOX, who has blocked it on copyright grounds."

22 March 2015

• 05:1705:17, 22 March 2015 diff hist +13 m PCC streetcar →Origins: Clarification and style.
• 05:0005:00, 22 March 2015 diff hist −1 m Dennis Prager →Media: Grammar.

16 February 2015

• 04:0304:03, 16 February 2015 diff hist +12 m North Hollywood shootout Grammar. Clarity

13 June 2014

• 01:5401:54, 13 June 2014 diff hist +12 Villa Angela-St. Joseph High School Undid revision 612617276 by 209.33.108.146 (talk) Reverted revision was ill-considered. Adjective "Roman" is a valid and necessary modifier in this context.

17 March 2014

• 03:0203:02, 17 March 2014 diff hist −2 m Heinen's Need to keep tense consistent with rest of article in two places. Yes, one edit was a correction in NUMBER of previous edit. This is a matter of TENSE.

8 March 2014

• 03:0903:09, 8 March 2014 diff hist +36 m Heinen's Material added without citation.