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A user with 307 edits. Account created on 14 February 2017.
20 August 2023
- 11:4911:49, 20 August 2023 diff hist +698 Template:Did you know nominations/Baaj Nwaavjo I'tah Kukveni – Ancestral Footprints of the Grand Canyon National Monument Briefly lifting the veil over people's eyes–present company excluded) to things that actually matter, not because they are told to support, but actually chemistry and history whilst it's still allowed. Final Phases of RCN RC(G)N and I am happy I saved those tweets 5yrs ago. Scooped Tags: Reverted 2017 wikitext editor
- 09:2409:24, 20 August 2023 diff hist −590 S-75 Dvina Whilst researching I noticed a few aspects needed inclusion. I could add & explain them whilst correcting a few minor typos; I was happy. I'd be an Editor again w/ a weapons system I've studied extensively. The Stub felt slightly biased & initially sought to correct the proper names & respective militaries. Seeing this as an ex = a bonus. I took my time. I've mentioned LDs before, not citing them as excuses nor seeking pity, but they suck. Not as familiar & panikced. I was afraid I'd ruin a Page Tag: Undo
- 06:2806:28, 20 August 2023 diff hist +590 S-75 Dvina →top: Clarified general description and info, added some missing info, corrected a few minor typos, and saw an opening to include more information without making the topic inaccessible (I hope) to general readers whilst citing a brief overview of the System's beginnings. And I forgot the main point that brought me here. Mea culpa, I am a Melvin sometimes. PVH ~~~~ Tags: Reverted 2017 wikitext editor
2 May 2023
- 02:4802:48, 2 May 2023 diff hist +4 Sound barrier Corrected missing letters and spacing between M"ach" and " 0.84". Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 02:4102:41, 2 May 2023 diff hist −1 m Sound barrier Typo Correction: Singular vs Plural Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 00:4300:43, 2 May 2023 diff hist +1,112 User talk:Paradise Chronicle →Question from Henry, P. V. (00:43, 2 May 2023): new section Tag: Mentorship module question
20 March 2023
- 20:4720:47, 20 March 2023 diff hist +50 m Criminal proceedings in the January 6 United States Capitol attack 𝜷-Test Typo Edits –Linguistic Manipulation since '21 = Artificial Narrative/Othering– Added "Building" to examples lacking the full/proper name of the Washington, D.C.-based seat of the U.S. Congress, the U.S. Capitol Building. (Unused: Rotunda suffices as a stand-alone or addition ~5 examples). Action, intent, & motive do NOT stem from bias, emotion, or partisanship. Limited–𝜷 bc high revision probability/Hoped to avoid breaking links/Errors accidental, I beg all pardons OMH 4thEstate Oath, PVH Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
14 February 2023
- 22:3622:36, 14 February 2023 diff hist +482 Oliver Sipple →Later years and death: I think it is only fair to mention a USMC Combat Veteran's healthy physical & mental states before the act of heroism (and opportunism) led to a downward spiral. The original article did not mention that he did not struggle with the various negative stressors and self-medicating until after groups he trusted & a man he considered a friend, whose campaign he had worked on and supported, only to be sold-out by both and caused him incredibly severe negative fallout. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 22:0322:03, 14 February 2023 diff hist +4 m Oliver Sipple →Ford assassination attempt: Added revolver caliber Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 21:5421:54, 14 February 2023 diff hist +7 m Oliver Sipple →Early life: Added “second” to celebrate the USMC Veteran serving two Tours of Duty Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
29 August 2022
- 09:0609:06, 29 August 2022 diff hist +16 m Statues of the National Statuary Hall Collection Added Ranks earned as Military Leaders, of two qualifying metrics honoured for placement, before state/Commonwealth removal. "We Salute the Rank, not the man" being one motivation and the other proper Historical context. Not intended to cause aggro, this is akin to adding "former U.S. President, Senator, Representative, etc." even if personal biases intentionally overlook proper honorifics or titles. (General example, not implying any relationship or assumptions) PVH Clean up/copyedit Fixing sty Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
17 July 2022
- 19:4919:49, 17 July 2022 diff hist 0 m Caduceus as a symbol of medicine →Early use in a possible medical context: This is a Minor/Typo Edit: I updated "caduceus" to "Caduceus" (and "herald's staff" to "Herald's Staff") to reflect proper noun usage rules and continuity of word flow. The article/page uses the capitalised version throughout all Sections and as found in other sources e.g. Scholastic papers, Journals, Peer Reviews, and publications. and general professional usage — apply the same Stylebook(s) rules. Hope this helps! Have a wonderful day! PVH Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
5 May 2022
- 22:1922:19, 5 May 2022 diff hist +88 m Ruben Gallego Capitalisation of Offices and positions. Also, to be frank, there is no such thing as a "former Marine", only Retired (20+ Years) or if possible, worded in a way to acknowledge and respect said service. This is especially true for our combat veterans. Again, my intentions are to clarify/help (esp. the capitalisation) but "former Marine" applied to a Combat Veteran, one who saw Hell, lost so many Brother-at-Arms, his best mate, later dedicating his life to serving others, deserves a few more wrds Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 21:5921:59, 5 May 2022 diff hist +136 m Ruben Gallego →Career: Just wanted to clarify a few parts/add specific terms/add appropriate Rank/positions. Also, thought I'd help with w/c and flow. Hope these offer a little bit of help. As for the Sheriff's additions, no matter personal preference, we were taught to follow the style rules and earned or duly elected officials/offices, showing respect regardless of opinion. If unfitting, pls accept my apologies. Nothing malicious or w/bias was intended. Trying to honour 4th Estate & Wiki inpartiality Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
22 July 2021
- 22:1922:19, 22 July 2021 diff hist +142 Buprenorphine Added Content: Hoped to clarify the (oftentimes, accidentally of course, but #EndStigma means 'Ardcore!) confusing different “types” of the same medication. Also, want to ensure the differentiation between the types of Dependence - I wanted to expand on these, in a different section, but thought I'd test the proverbial waters - and I wanted to make sure everything flows well. If I made a mistake, I am so sorry! Please revise and whilst helpful and appreciated; no worries about taking the time... Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
23 December 2020
- 01:2701:27, 23 December 2020 diff hist −130 Julia Boseman →Personal life: Updated to reflect the section title and focus. Although his the announcement, the timing and taking higher office are interesting - and I am 50/50 certain this sentiment will not be shared/this edit will remain - but it lacks any association with Julia (I know her from my time involved with Wilmington & Raleigh politics, so it's not meant as a negative), her service and dedication to SD-9. I understand the recent rush of importance re "The First..." and I know it's not a n... Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
26 October 2020
- 06:1006:10, 26 October 2020 diff hist +414 User talk:Struthious Bandersnatch →Your Opinion?: new section Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 06:0106:01, 26 October 2020 diff hist +278 Anti-Defamation League Added clarification and unbiased wording. Again, in the interest of what Journalism repress, or used too. Before complaints and Flags, I ask judges to look at the ratio of Sources used to support quotes and assumptions, from the NGO v. Other Outlets. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 05:2405:24, 26 October 2020 diff hist +87 Anti-Defamation League Added clarification regarding the metrics used to decide what and who represents "hate" and "extremest groups" as they are the arbitrary Final Judge re such matters. In NO way am I defending said groups & acts, but as a #4thEstate Journo, I'm bound to correct ambiguity & potential Biases when I read them. To the OP, please see this for what it is, an objective edit. Nothing more. TY Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
29 September 2020
- 07:0907:09, 29 September 2020 diff hist +7 Nuclear weapons testing Self-edit. Note from previous; I tried to leave as much original content as I could out of respect for the original publisher. I didn't fancy being an arse. Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 07:0407:04, 29 September 2020 diff hist +1,370 Nuclear weapons testing Fixed typos, clarification of tests and definitions, included brief historical aspects making the examples Special or "Cool" and cleaned up the terminologies and POV-based attention, placing focus on these Tests and the devices, and people, as well. PVH Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
17 September 2020
- 22:0222:02, 17 September 2020 diff hist +47 Project Sapphire →Event: They all served with great honour and completed the Mission without failure. Breaking them down by Sex seems forced and takes away from the duties, highly specialised skills and overall Badarseness! Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
15 September 2020
- 23:5123:51, 15 September 2020 diff hist 0 Executive Order 13769 →Statutory authorization and related prohibitions: Typo Capitalisation Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 23:4923:49, 15 September 2020 diff hist +20 Executive Order 13769 Typos, Continuity and Flow (limited application of needed edits, sorry, I don't have time to fully edit and source the necessary corrections. I thought they have corrected months ago/since my last visit/edit. I intend to submit full edits. But looking at the log shows it's not as easy as simply offering a suggested Edit and challenging the biased intentions demonstrated by the OP. IOW: Requires a lot more time and repeats, therefore, I'd rather try when 100% dedication & speedy replies are p... Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 22:4622:46, 15 September 2020 diff hist −8,965 User:Henry, P. V. House Cleaning current Tags: Blanking Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
30 August 2020
- 22:2522:25, 30 August 2020 diff hist −4 United States military aircraft serial numbers →Presentation (Army/Air Force): Typo: Only noticed whilst Editing Page opened; I replaced mismatched punctuation with those used throughout Article. I'm sorry it took three separate attempts to correct mistakes found in two lines, but it's been kind of a long day (promise I'm not a Jackarse) Cheers Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 22:1822:18, 30 August 2020 diff hist +1 United States military aircraft serial numbers →Presentation (Army/Air Force): Typo: No space between word following a ")" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 22:1522:15, 30 August 2020 diff hist +8 United States military aircraft serial numbers →Presentation (Army/Air Force): Typo/continuity: Changed "EX:" to "for example" as found throughout the page/article. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
28 August 2020
- 00:4500:45, 28 August 2020 diff hist +7 USS Germantown (LSD-42) Added continuity from both the page Sidebar and Info from LCAC info stating the numbers. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
16 July 2020
- 08:2208:22, 16 July 2020 diff hist +137 NASCAR All-Star Race →History: Just a cool and unique approach used but not remembered Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 08:0108:01, 16 July 2020 diff hist +302 NASCAR All-Star Race →History: Correction. Clarification. And adding the main special themed driver. I mean, look who sponsored him! Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 07:2807:28, 16 July 2020 diff hist +15 NASCAR All-Star Race →History: Dates Added Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 07:2407:24, 16 July 2020 diff hist −28 NASCAR All-Star Race →History: Self Typo/Dyslexic moment. Sorry Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 07:1507:15, 16 July 2020 diff hist +64 NASCAR All-Star Race →Format history: Proper term and layout clarification Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 07:0607:06, 16 July 2020 diff hist +86 NASCAR All-Star Race →History: Update on location & event history Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 06:5906:59, 16 July 2020 diff hist +133 NASCAR All-Star Race →History: Added a brief description to show why Charlotte was chosen and the significance of the Track. It wasn't random, same as hosting the longest race and the first to hold Night Races. Under Humpy Wheeler, a race always ran the day scheduled and not postponed due to weather. Again, source of local pride and why this area is NASCAR's Home. P5H Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 06:4306:43, 16 July 2020 diff hist +79 NASCAR All-Star Race →Format history: Added info trying to help expand on the OP's point. I'm from Concord, at least the first six months, but returned from Blighty and remained there. Before the Schism saw NASCAR slowly losing supporters and it's Soul, the population of the (former) small town nearly doubled! Campers and RVs set up weeks before the events, bringing incredible economic assistance to assistance to an area decimated by NAFTA (Later years) I mention this to show how much Two Weeks... meant. As f... Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
20 June 2020
- 19:5119:51, 20 June 2020 diff hist +4 Pakistan and weapons of mass destruction →Air: Typo: Capitalised "Mirage" and added "III" to reflect type. Hope y'all are having a wonderful weekend! PVH Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
29 May 2020
- 03:5203:52, 29 May 2020 diff hist +138 Ted Taylor (physicist) →Legacy: Semi-Self Edit. Sorry. I'm doing too many things at once, but really wanted to update this, as the subject and Dr. Taylor are important to History and me. I moved the location of the earlier entered type of Weapons System, to try & help the Flow & used/added the technical term "R.R." to avoid confusion; Offering the true type as used both then and today, to avoid possible confusion or partial understanding of use Explained the two types of systems used to deliver the device, with... Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 01:2201:22, 29 May 2020 diff hist +17 Ted Taylor (physicist) →Legacy: Added Weapons System Type Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 00:1400:14, 29 May 2020 diff hist −45 Decapitation (military strategy) →In fiction: Self Edit: Tried to correct the"flow" and w/c. Made it less complex, I hope, and eliminating verbosity. Self Edit: A few typos on MY part (mea culpa) Cheers, PVH Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
28 May 2020
- 23:5023:50, 28 May 2020 diff hist +453 Decapitation (military strategy) →In fiction: Editted major plot holes and improper terminology associated with the film and strategy cited by OP. Tried to clarify the cause of & type of Soviet response, as well as the U.S. by explaining the difference between civilian and a Fully Dedicated Strategic Decapitation - First Use or Retaliatory - Thermonuclear Strike. Without going into too much detail, but enough so the example could remain relevant. Hope all are well! PVH Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
6 May 2020
- 07:0507:05, 6 May 2020 diff hist +121 Immigration and Nationality Act of 1965 Reworded to describe the direct Association between this Vote and behaviour of both citizens and Reps. The various types of Southern and Conservative Dems/Third-Party Reps recently absorbed into the Dem. Party. IOW; the similar behaviours are the same old: Concern about re-election. The original placement of Southern Democrats as a Political Party and not mentioning the actions of Southern Republicans is misleading in that not all Southern Dems were true "Southern/Conservative Dems" and the D... Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 05:2005:20, 6 May 2020 diff hist +93 Talk:Executive Order 13769 No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 05:0505:05, 6 May 2020 diff hist +2,133 Talk:Executive Order 13769 No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 04:2204:22, 6 May 2020 diff hist +24 Executive Order 13769 Fixed Typos. President (when used) needed to be capitalised or added, as well as "Mr., and the capitalisation of Executive Order. The latter because it's the historically used practice, but specifically the continuity of use throughout the Article. This COULD be applicable towards the omission or failure to adopt the former typos. I say this because I've a feeling any edits made to this page will see a bit of attention, given the edits needed, the demand for discussion before changing and lea... Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
2 May 2020
- 20:1420:14, 2 May 2020 diff hist +11 Inferno (Dante) →Seventh Circle (Violence): The notion Dante recognised and identified King Alexandre III of Macedon amongst other famous (then & now) historical figures wallowing in the Phlegethon (Cir. Seven; Outer Ring or Ring One), remains an example of yet another historical & literary... erm ... "disagreement". Although those most widely recognised, including those familiar to and living within Dante's lifetime {+/- 100yrs either side} & as cited in his work, as well as this article, Dante takes car... Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
25 March 2020
- 19:5419:54, 25 March 2020 diff hist +21 The Head (1994 TV series) →Characters: Added Clarification Removed repetition of a clause shared by 2 ordered sentences. Hope it helps Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
4 February 2020
- 02:1302:13, 4 February 2020 diff hist +289 No-fly zone →Iraq, 1991–2003: Added additional context and brief explanation/one example of a belligerent (and horrible) act committed against civilian populations. Saddam was a secular leader, but proved disdain towards minority groups, ethnic and religious, and willingness to use abhorrent tactics. Not counting the ground offensive and shelling. The snippets of sourced material present a semi-bias tone and make such reactions (NFZs) appear to be fully unilateral and without any semblance of justifie... Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
27 November 2019
- 07:1107:11, 27 November 2019 diff hist −18 Vapor cone After Publishing, felt addition to be unnecessary and took away from the "clean" look of the pics & captions. Mea culpa Undid revision 928165710 by Henry, P. V. (talk) Tags: Undo Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit