User contributions for David12345

27 October 2024

• 20:0020:00, 27 October 2024 diff hist +10 List of most-visited websites →List: Regardless of where you stand on Twitter/X, this is a clear case of WP:EGG

17 October 2024

• 10:5410:54, 17 October 2024 diff hist +6 LGV Bordeaux–Toulouse The line will be finished, and service on the line will start current

5 October 2024

• 19:3219:32, 5 October 2024 diff hist −292 Alisson Becker This is a dead link, and even if it weren't, no single source would suffice to say that he is simply regarded as best in the world.

14 September 2024

• 12:3512:35, 14 September 2024 diff hist +6 Provinces of Prussia till is informal English, until is the word normally used in written English

23 May 2024

• 08:4508:45, 23 May 2024 diff hist −14 Template:Microcontrollers x86 is its own thing with a history reaching back decades, and not the same thing as Galileo

14 May 2024

• 17:1817:18, 14 May 2024 diff hist +1 m Boeing Commercial Airplanes No edit summary

13 April 2024

• 07:4707:47, 13 April 2024 diff hist −7 Kingdom of Sicily Let's stick to modern, geographical descriptions more easily understood by the general public

3 April 2024

• 16:0516:05, 3 April 2024 diff hist −1,668 The Nylon Curtain If we start including completely random records like this (there is absolutely nothing significant about a record amount of time spent at number 17) there is just no end in sight.

22 March 2024

• 21:2921:29, 22 March 2024 diff hist +5 Grand Theft Auto IV →Release: A censor is not something that is censored, but someone who censors

18 March 2024

• 16:5616:56, 18 March 2024 diff hist −2 Berlin Ringbahn →Reunification: grammar

10 March 2024

• 12:5612:56, 10 March 2024 diff hist +10 Arthur Seyss-Inquart The first part is just a description of his offical titles. The second part is such a simple phrase that it doesn't need to be a quote.

9 March 2024

• 23:4623:46, 9 March 2024 diff hist +1 m Clean Bandit No edit summary
• 17:5017:50, 9 March 2024 diff hist +5 Susan Collins In the American context, the word congresswoman is (confusingly) used for only for members of the house of respresentatives.

7 March 2024

• 19:4519:45, 7 March 2024 diff hist −3 Kuala Lumpur al-Qaeda summit This links up with the 'failing to' earling in the sentence. Failing to arresting is ungrammatical.

4 March 2024

• 21:2621:26, 4 March 2024 diff hist +18 Netherlands Bach Society Consequently does not fit, as this does not neccesarily follow. Wikipedia articles generally described what has happened, rather than what is ongoing, as it is less likely to go out of date

28 February 2024

• 23:0323:03, 28 February 2024 diff hist −8 Hitachi One cannot specialise in basically half of all industries that exist, that is the opposite of specialisation

16 February 2024

• 19:3719:37, 16 February 2024 diff hist −82 Sears →Sponsorships: this whole bit was poorly written and unnecesary - what else would they have called it with their naming rights?

11 February 2024

• 21:5421:54, 11 February 2024 diff hist +3 FIFA World Cup Clearer phrasing
• 19:5119:51, 11 February 2024 diff hist −1 Paul Greengrass →Personal life: more accurate phrasing that more closely follows the source

18 January 2024

• 12:2312:23, 18 January 2024 diff hist −106 Ferdinand Magellan rv vandalism Tag: Manual revert
• 11:5011:50, 18 January 2024 diff hist −37 Demographics of Japan →Historical overview: This is not the lowest level since 1900. It might be the biggest drop since 1900, but that wouldn't be very noteworthy since the population grew almost that entire time. The second sentence was rather poorly worded.

16 January 2024

• 19:4119:41, 16 January 2024 diff hist +15 Serbo-Croatian →Demographics: Literally two paragraphs later bosnian is shown to have more speakers that Serbian in Bosnia (unsurprisingly), meaning it's also a minority language there.
• 19:3819:38, 16 January 2024 diff hist +99 Bosnia and Herzegovina →Languages: What does 'it' refer to??
• 15:5315:53, 16 January 2024 diff hist −218 Niamh While it might appear similar, the Dutch pronunciation is nothing like the Irish pronunciation of Niamh. Combine that with the fact that one is a given name and the other a surname, and these two have absolutely no relation to one another at all
• 14:2214:22, 16 January 2024 diff hist +27 Dragons' Den (British TV programme) →Rejected investments: There is nothing in this source about free trade. And what on earth does "suffixing a focus" mean???

14 January 2024

• 20:1520:15, 14 January 2024 diff hist −8 Chinese Taipei Moved some things around so there isn't a bit of phrase hanging around there at the end

12 January 2024

• 17:4917:49, 12 January 2024 diff hist +8 Space Shuttle Challenger disaster rephrased for clarification (the previous phrasing was ambigious, as it could be read as saying that they didn't address the issue even after the disaster).

3 January 2024

• 22:1722:17, 3 January 2024 diff hist −454 Candace Owens →Personal life: Removing duplicate information

2 January 2024

• 17:3717:37, 2 January 2024 diff hist −4 Dushanbe →Ancient times: no definite article needed here (English grammar is so random)

1 January 2024

• 02:4602:46, 1 January 2024 diff hist −16 Benito Mussolini →Death: Within the context of WWII, the United Nations refers to the Allied Forces (the formal organisation we now know as the UN was only founded after the war). While I don't want to modify the quote that follows, it's clearer for the reader this way

30 December 2023

• 18:0218:02, 30 December 2023 diff hist −3 m Bangladesh →Language: this isn't needed in this sentence

29 December 2023

• 23:1123:11, 29 December 2023 diff hist +9 Imam Khomeini Airport station More natural English phrasing. The Metro Line has its own article

28 December 2023

• 17:0817:08, 28 December 2023 diff hist −17 Legislative Yuan Improved sentence flow. Also made the language more precise (there's no need to beat around the bush)

25 December 2023

• 00:3500:35, 25 December 2023 diff hist −135 Visa policy of Abkhazia →Visitors statistics: This is both poorly written, and adds nothing to what one could simply take from the table below

19 December 2023

• 19:1119:11, 19 December 2023 diff hist 0 Nuremberg more natural word order

15 December 2023

• 15:0115:01, 15 December 2023 diff hist 0 Razavi Khorasan province →History: There is no reason for this to be underlined, and this was weirdly phrased

13 December 2023

• 18:5018:50, 13 December 2023 diff hist +28 The Madness of Crowds: Gender, Race and Identity Holy hell, these might have been some of the most biased descriptions I have yet encountered on Wikipedia. It's also just straight up wrong - you can fill quite a few bookshelfs with books criticizing wokeness and cancel culture and leftism and all that these days

10 December 2023

• 00:4200:42, 10 December 2023 diff hist +2 m Kuwait at the 2024 Summer Olympics grammar

18 November 2023

• 18:2418:24, 18 November 2023 diff hist −16 Iron Cross Why would you phrase it like that? It adds ambiguity, and it's not like the term Weimar Republic was overused or anything
• 11:0211:02, 18 November 2023 diff hist +4 Isfahan Undid revision 1185682446 by 91.92.133.157 (talk) I don't speak persian, but the old spelling is in the dictionary, and the new one is not. If there is a good reason to change it, it needs to be explained. Tag: Undo

17 November 2023

• 23:0223:02, 17 November 2023 diff hist −12 Tashkent →Transportation: these aren't adjectives but nouns in their own right

6 November 2023

• 09:2909:29, 6 November 2023 diff hist +8 Peter the Great To say that he designed it himself necessarily means he was the main contributor. The term 'civil script' was also not explained.

26 October 2023

• 17:1517:15, 26 October 2023 diff hist +2 m Kentucky Coal Museum No edit summary

13 October 2023

• 10:0810:08, 13 October 2023 diff hist +16 Alexander Mosaic →Battle: West? The Only part where Alexander moved west was from the Levant to Egypt, where he did not fight Darius. While Issus is close to the mediteranean, Gaugamela is definitely not.

8 October 2023

• 09:4709:47, 8 October 2023 diff hist −1 m BYD Dolphin spelling

26 September 2023

• 22:3422:34, 26 September 2023 diff hist −10 Wolfenstein II: The New Colossus →Story: Improved description

15 August 2023

• 11:4411:44, 15 August 2023 diff hist −13 The Lord of the Rings Online →Releases and subscription model: meaningless buzzword removed

22 July 2023

• 04:0504:05, 22 July 2023 diff hist −9 Guam grammar
• 03:1803:18, 22 July 2023 diff hist +4 Adidas Grammar Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

20 July 2023

• 18:2218:22, 20 July 2023 diff hist −4 20 July plot Small rewrite to avoid rapid repition of 'but' Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit