User contributions for 97.83.30.92

21 May 2012

• 01:4801:48, 21 May 2012 diff hist −43 George Jackson (activist) →Biography: removed inconsistency, a very different version of the events is already mentioned in the article.
• 01:4401:44, 21 May 2012 diff hist −840 Stanley Williams →Williams' children: This is completely unneccessary as it says right here that the story was a hoax. Removed.

18 May 2012

• 04:4704:47, 18 May 2012 diff hist −29 Haywire (2011 film) →Critical reception: moderated excessively strong language

14 May 2012

• 08:2908:29, 14 May 2012 diff hist +2 List of Game of Thrones characters →Royal court and officials
• 08:2808:28, 14 May 2012 diff hist −18 List of Game of Thrones characters →Royal court and officials: clarified Selmy's participation in Roberts War - he did not betray King Aerys at the end of the conflict, so the comparisson to Jaime Lannister is not only confusing but irrelevant.

9 May 2012

• 02:1402:14, 9 May 2012 diff hist −102 Battle of Two Sisters →Casualties: removed strongly worded, uncited opinion

7 May 2012

• 19:4419:44, 7 May 2012 diff hist −88 Pangolin →Threats: Removed specific list of medicinal uses.
• 19:3719:37, 7 May 2012 diff hist −102 Asiatic wildcat →Characteristics: It's kind of hard to focus on what you're reading with this giant trophy display on the left margin. Why is this in here?
• 19:2719:27, 7 May 2012 diff hist −46 Pixie-bob →Gallery: This cat isn't exhibiting dog-like behavior, it's just been put on a leash on this picture. And it doesn't look too happy about it....
• 16:2016:20, 7 May 2012 diff hist −1 Beagle 2 →Beagle 2 in fiction: fixed spacing from previous edit
• 16:2016:20, 7 May 2012 diff hist −242 Beagle 2 →Beagle 2 in fiction: This has nothing to do with Beagle 2

28 April 2012

• 04:5104:51, 28 April 2012 diff hist −57 Sea Shepherd Conservation Society →External links: Not sure who added this but the site is just a bunch of pirated whale wars footage....obviously does not meet wiki standards. Possible vandalism?

26 April 2012

• 23:5723:57, 26 April 2012 diff hist −285 Macquarie Island →Climate: This section is about the climate of the island, not a comparrison of the gloomiest places on earth. Unreferenced, out of context - removed.
• 23:4923:49, 26 April 2012 diff hist +107 Macquarie Island Added information about the Royal Penguin colony in the initial description. It belongs there as that is what the island is best known for.
• 23:3923:39, 26 April 2012 diff hist +9 The Colony (American TV series) fixed nonsense wording
• 11:4011:40, 26 April 2012 diff hist +123 Talk:Ashley Massaro/GA1 →Refs: Askmen.com is a valid reference? Cmon.....
• 10:0410:04, 26 April 2012 diff hist −334 Celery →Medicine: The very first sentence of the reference provided refutes the claim it is being used to prove. Content removed.
• 05:2505:25, 26 April 2012 diff hist −326 Rum Rebellion →Causes: Removed unreferenced, generalized statements beginning with the words "some historians believe". Enough said....
• 05:1705:17, 26 April 2012 diff hist −149 Rum Rebellion →Enmity between Bligh and Macarthur: This is not only highly biased, it also completely contradicts numerous statements previously made in the article which describe Macarthur's motives as being purely finnacial..
• 05:0705:07, 26 April 2012 diff hist −609 Great Swamp Fight →Notable Officers and Indian Chiefs: removed irrelevant biographical information
• 05:0305:03, 26 April 2012 diff hist −2 Great Swamp Fight →Battle: removed allegation that King Phillip was shot in the heart, there is no reference given and this info does not appear elsewhere.
• 05:0005:00, 26 April 2012 diff hist −356 Siege of Springfield →Aftermath and legacy: Removed sentence beginning with the words "as mentioned above" and containing no new information. DIRE need of cleanup seems to apply here.
• 04:5904:59, 26 April 2012 diff hist −123 Siege of Springfield →Aftermath and legacy: Fixed abominable sentence structure, removed gross generalization.
• 04:5704:57, 26 April 2012 diff hist −112 Siege of Springfield →Attack: Removed another prose-like statement. This information can already be found on the appropriate page.
• 04:5504:55, 26 April 2012 diff hist −12 Siege of Springfield →King Philip visits Springfield: removed description of attack as "treacherous", this does not meet encyclopedic standards.
• 04:2904:29, 26 April 2012 diff hist +10 King Philip's War →Native American Campaigns: changed wording slightly to improve readability
• 04:2804:28, 26 April 2012 diff hist −58 King Philip's War →Native American Campaigns: this article is about the war, not a genre of literature. Removed the erroneous information while preserving the relevant.
• 04:2204:22, 26 April 2012 diff hist −58 King Philip's War →The Trial: Unreferenced, speculative....running out of synonyms here.
• 04:1104:11, 26 April 2012 diff hist −156 Wampanoag →Conversion to Christianity: removed more unreferenced speculation
• 04:0904:09, 26 April 2012 diff hist −35 Wampanoag →Colonial expansion: Again, it is not necessary to supply a reference for European colonists taking land from natives without payment. This is common knowledge.
• 04:0704:07, 26 April 2012 diff hist −35 Wampanoag →Massasoit: Common historical knowledge does not require a reference
• 04:0304:03, 26 April 2012 diff hist −363 Wampanoag Removed material repeated earlier in the article, transfered reference citation to the above location.
• 03:5803:58, 26 April 2012 diff hist −130 Wampanoag Stating the obvious, not needed.
• 03:5703:57, 26 April 2012 diff hist −130 Wampanoag Removed further unreferenced speculation. This article is in serious need of cleanup.
• 03:5503:55, 26 April 2012 diff hist −154 Wampanoag Removed unreferenced conjecture sandwiched between factual statements
• 03:5303:53, 26 April 2012 diff hist −366 Leptospirosis →History: removed low-relevancy statement lacking citation since 2010
• 03:4603:46, 26 April 2012 diff hist +34 HMS Blenheim (1761) →Loss: Added brief description of who James Morrison was (his name seems out of place here without some explanation)
• 03:3103:31, 26 April 2012 diff hist −372 Peter Heywood →Fugitive: This is wildly speculative and the reference given is a work of fiction. Entire article requires cleanup in that regard.
• 03:2703:27, 26 April 2012 diff hist +10 Peter Heywood →Fugitive: clarified circumstances and brought in line with other wikipedia articles on this topic
• 03:0203:02, 26 April 2012 diff hist −674 Mutiny on the Bounty →A modern interpretation: This is a perfect example of something that is properly referenced but is of material not keeping with wikipedia's standards. This material should appear on the page about the book, if anywhere. Tag: section blanking
• 02:1802:18, 26 April 2012 diff hist +428 User talk:C.Fred →Ghengis Khan edit request: new section
• 02:1302:13, 26 April 2012 diff hist −804 Hans Langsdorff →Langsdorff's role in retrospect: The only refernced fact in this entire section talks about him being "high-class", everything else is unreferenced conjecture. This section is not necessary and the article reads much better with its first ending

25 April 2012

• 20:4920:49, 25 April 2012 diff hist −154 Battle of the River Plate Unreferenced, vastly oversimplifies. This is just re-hashing the previous statements and is not necessary.
• 20:3220:32, 25 April 2012 diff hist −476 Samoa →20th century: This article is about the island nation of Samoa, not the cultural differences between it and its neighbor. This type of content does not meet wikipedia's standards.
• 20:2320:23, 25 April 2012 diff hist +35 Samoa →20th century: This is probably true but a reference should still be provided.
• 20:2020:20, 25 April 2012 diff hist −30 Samoa →History: The context of this statement is quite clear. If you don't like the wording bring it up on the talk page.
• 20:1520:15, 25 April 2012 diff hist −202 Mataʻafa Iosefo →Family: I have removed this entire section because the only content is innaccurate. These two men were not related by blood or even marriage, it's just a title. Tag: section blanking
• 04:1604:16, 25 April 2012 diff hist −107 Sibel Kekilli →Life and career: unreferenced, too much detail in this section already
• 03:5703:57, 25 April 2012 diff hist −130 Azawad →Unilaterally declared independence: reference given says nothing about an army having already been raised

22 April 2012

• 17:2817:28, 22 April 2012 diff hist +395 User talk:AussieLegend →About me: new section