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17:5617:56, 10 September 2023 diff hist +54 Donyale Luna Having Fellini and Otto Preminger, who were two major directors, denoted as underground, is false, they were not underground film directors
17:5517:55, 10 September 2023 diff hist −1,921 Donyale Luna Removed because of too many personal opinion assertions. Entire article is formatted like an opinion assay
17:5317:53, 10 September 2023 diff hist −4 Donyale Luna →Racial Identity: Her identity was clearly stated
17:5217:52, 10 September 2023 diff hist −172 Donyale Luna →Racial Identity: Removed irrelevant assertions
17:4817:48, 10 September 2023 diff hist −1 Donyale Luna →Early life: her maternal grandparents were already living in Detroit. It’s the paternal side that came through the great migration.
17:4717:47, 10 September 2023 diff hist +29 Donyale Luna Improving sentence Tag: Reverted
17:4617:46, 10 September 2023 diff hist −82 Donyale Luna →Early life: removed personal opinions Tag: Reverted
17:4517:45, 10 September 2023 diff hist +56 Donyale Luna Otto Preminger and Fredrico Fellini were not “underground directors Tag: Reverted
17:4317:43, 10 September 2023 diff hist −1,489 Donyale Luna One drop linking was very inappropriate, and the reference to other models are superfluous Tags: Reverted references removed
17:3717:37, 10 September 2023 diff hist +4 Donyale Luna →Early life: Father is listed as M ( Mulatto) on his birth record and her mothers father was a German immigrant Tag: Reverted
17:3217:32, 10 September 2023 diff hist −39 Donyale Luna →Detroit and New York: link removed. Equating being “ethnically ambiguous” with white washing, is a slur against multiracial people. Tag: Reverted
17:3017:30, 10 September 2023 diff hist −356 Donyale Luna →Detroit and New York: Removed opinion piece and essay style language. Condensed Tag: Reverted
17:2717:27, 10 September 2023 diff hist −1,602 Donyale Luna →Detroit and New York: Bridget Keenan reference has zero to do with this article. It’s put in to continue an essay style of writing that’s inappropriate for Wikipedia. Tag: Reverted
17:2117:21, 10 September 2023 diff hist −4,461 Donyale Luna Removed uncited material that reads like a personal opinion piece and trails WAY off topic Tag: Reverted

10 September 2023