User contributions for 12.233.146.130

25 July 2013

• 01:0701:07, 25 July 2013 diff hist +12 Heckler & Koch G3 →Other military variants and derivatives
• 00:5400:54, 25 July 2013 diff hist +139 Scarecrow →Cultural impact
• 00:5200:52, 25 July 2013 diff hist −178 Scarecrow →Music: Improper title format x3, fancruft, weak and irrelevant examples
• 00:4900:49, 25 July 2013 diff hist −439 Scarecrow →Music: Redundant and non-noteworthy
• 00:4800:48, 25 July 2013 diff hist 0 Scarecrow →Cultural impact
• 00:4700:47, 25 July 2013 diff hist −12 Scarecrow →Comics: Improper title format x3, fancruft
• 00:4400:44, 25 July 2013 diff hist −953 Scarecrow →In literature and film: Duplication
• 00:4300:43, 25 July 2013 diff hist −205 Scarecrow →In literature and film: Factual errors and omissions, improper title formatting x6, ungrammatical run-on sentences, excessive and irrelevant detail, weak or irrelevant example
• 00:1400:14, 25 July 2013 diff hist 0 Scarecrow →In literature and film: Misleading link text
• 00:0900:09, 25 July 2013 diff hist +2 Son of Kong →Plot: Improper format for the name of a ship
• 00:0700:07, 25 July 2013 diff hist +2 Son of Kong →Plot

24 July 2013

• 23:4623:46, 24 July 2013 diff hist −1 Christine McGlade Not possessive
• 23:4423:44, 24 July 2013 diff hist −67 You Can't Do That on Television Tense and number disagreements, confused run-on sentences, unnecessary verbiage, redundant, puffery, IMDB unreliable source
• 01:4301:43, 24 July 2013 diff hist −5 The Body Snatcher (1945 film) →Plot
• 01:3801:38, 24 July 2013 diff hist −8 The Body Snatcher (1945 film) →Plot
• 01:3401:34, 24 July 2013 diff hist −1,050 The Body Snatcher (1945 film) →Plot: Imprecise and inaccurate; excessively redundant; comma proliferation; ungrammatical; conflicting verb tenses; number conflict; garbage words; extraneous and irrelevant detail; needlessly verbose
• 00:3800:38, 24 July 2013 diff hist +33 Voyage to the Bottom of the Sea →Other media
• 00:3400:34, 24 July 2013 diff hist +23 Henry Daniell →Personal life
• 00:3100:31, 24 July 2013 diff hist +4 Body snatching →In literature: Improper format for the title of a novel
• 00:3100:31, 24 July 2013 diff hist −3 Body snatching →In literature
• 00:3000:30, 24 July 2013 diff hist −78 Body snatching →Contemporary body snatching: Clearer statement of material deleted in my last edit (meaning the deleted passage was redundant in addition to its other sins), but the cite is still a raw url and does not meet reliability criteria
• 00:2600:26, 24 July 2013 diff hist −149 Body snatching →In film and television: Ungrammatical sentence fragment of dubious relevance and meaning, raw url cite does not meet criteria for reliability
• 00:2400:24, 24 July 2013 diff hist −13 Body snatching →In music: Improper format for the title of a song x5, excessive emphasis, failure to use terminal punctuation
• 00:1900:19, 24 July 2013 diff hist +2 Body snatching →In literature: Improper title format x2

23 July 2013

• 23:3823:38, 23 July 2013 diff hist +8 Shady Deal at Sunny Acres →See also: Improper list formatting
• 23:3723:37, 23 July 2013 diff hist −4 Shady Deal at Sunny Acres →Cast: Excessive emphasis
• 23:3623:36, 23 July 2013 diff hist +21 Shady Deal at Sunny Acres Improper format for the title of an episode of an ongoing TV series; CN; weasels; misleading link text of dubious relevance (linking to articles that do not feature the characters, and who have no articles unto themselves)
• 23:2923:29, 23 July 2013 diff hist −5 Maverick (TV series) →1994 film adaptation
• 23:2723:27, 23 July 2013 diff hist −425 Maverick (TV series) →Spin-offs: Editorializing; puffery; ungrammatical run-ons; excessive and irrelevant detail
• 23:1623:16, 23 July 2013 diff hist −1 Maverick (TV series) →Notable episodes
• 23:1423:14, 23 July 2013 diff hist −627 Maverick (TV series) →Notable episodes: Excessive and repetitive linking to the same articles, all of which have been amply linked previously in this article; editorializing; excessive detail of dubious relevance and unacceptable tone; ungrammatical run-ons; puffery
• 22:5122:51, 23 July 2013 diff hist +23 Maverick (TV series) →Supporting players and recurring roles
• 22:5022:50, 23 July 2013 diff hist −5 Maverick (TV series) →Supporting players and recurring roles
• 22:3322:33, 23 July 2013 diff hist −4 Maverick (TV series) →Jack Kelly as Bart Maverick
• 22:2922:29, 23 July 2013 diff hist −5 The Wrecker (Stevenson novel) Ungrammatical, double terminal punctuation
• 22:2422:24, 23 July 2013 diff hist +3 The Ebb-Tide →Plot
• 22:2122:21, 23 July 2013 diff hist −142 The Ebb-Tide →Plot: Gen'l cleanup for run-ons, grammar, pronoun proliferation, garbage words
• 22:1022:10, 23 July 2013 diff hist −48 Lloyd Osbourne →South Seas with Stevenson: Ungrammatical run-on sentences; excessive repetitive linking to the same article; inaccurate linking; failure to capitalize proper nouns
• 22:0522:05, 23 July 2013 diff hist −17 Lloyd Osbourne →Early life: Ungrammatical run-on sentences
• 22:0222:02, 23 July 2013 diff hist +7 Lloyd Osbourne →Early life: Vague/euphemistic/slang
• 03:3403:34, 23 July 2013 diff hist +77 Manhattan Murder Mystery →Plot
• 03:2803:28, 23 July 2013 diff hist −18 Manhattan Murder Mystery →Plot
• 03:2103:21, 23 July 2013 diff hist +2 Manhattan Murder Mystery →Plot
• 03:1903:19, 23 July 2013 diff hist +2 Manhattan Murder Mystery →Plot
• 03:1703:17, 23 July 2013 diff hist +1 Manhattan Murder Mystery →Plot
• 03:1503:15, 23 July 2013 diff hist −563 Manhattan Murder Mystery →Plot: More trimming
• 02:5802:58, 23 July 2013 diff hist −567 Manhattan Murder Mystery →Plot: More trimming, editing for spelling consistency and grammar
• 02:4402:44, 23 July 2013 diff hist −800 Manhattan Murder Mystery →Plot: Editing for concision (not very successfully) and rv vandalism committed 09:37, 19 July 2013‎ by anon user 125.21.161.2, incompatible verb tenses
• 02:2902:29, 23 July 2013 diff hist +14 Manhattan Murder Mystery →Plot
• 02:0802:08, 23 July 2013 diff hist −96 The Shadow (serial) →Plot: Ungrammatical, redundant, comma proliferation, improper use of ellipsis