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Background
The first sentence under "Background" needs fixing. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2403:6200:8850:DBBB:8C8:B7F0:1399:75EE (talk) 22:17, 15 December 2017 (UTC)
POV
The title of this article is POV
Decisive?
How is this decisive? Paris was more of a liabilty for the German army then anything. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ben200 (talk • contribs) 14:34, 26 November 2011 (UTC)
Too many images?
When I scrolled through this article, the first thing that I noticed was that there are many small images, to a point where the article seems cluttered with them. Does anyone agree that several of the images are unnecessary and should be removed? —ems24 02:21, 5 April 2010 (UTC)
- Agree. SilkTork *YES! 17:31, 8 August 2010 (UTC)
Choltitz' role
The sources used to "analyse" Choltitz' role during this battle are a joke, to say the least. I have a stack of copies from the original German war documents from the military archives in Freiburg and there is little to support the French version (as the article claims). For example, Choltitz explicitly ordered not to destroy any food "as a matter of principle" on 18 August 1944. But some poorly researched and politically motivated TV documentary seems to be a far more reliable source. Besides, it is not true that Choltitz has still an overall positive image in Germany. Recently, it has become public that he admitted to have executed Jews on the Eastern Front. But it is also true that he was in much closer contact with the German military resistance against Hitler than we had previously known. In summary, Choltitz was neither a hero nor a pure Nazi war criminal. Please see the results from Sönke Neitzel, Taping Hitler's Generals, with Choltitz' eavesdropped conversations in captivity. This Wiki article definitely needs some improvement. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 62.158.10.31 (talk) 13:45, 8 September 2010 (UTC)
If you scan these and post a link to them here I will happily rewrite and properly document this section. 2605:A000:DFC0:5C:6DF5:185B:8D1:2F20 (talk) 21:12, 8 October 2014 (UTC)
From the text:
In his memoir Brennt Paris? ("Is Paris Burning?"), first published in 1950, Choltitz describes himself as the saviour of Paris.[dubious – discuss] .....
Whether Choltitz "saved" Paris does not matter in his description of his historical role. The question is whether he I do not have his book, so someone who does have it can cite his perception: did he say that he made the decision that kept the German Armed forces from demolishing Paris? On this Walther Choltitz is the definitive authority. Pbrower2a (talk) 12:45, 11 June 2016 (UTC)
Spanish Republicans.
Spanish Republicans from the 9 División were the first to enter in Paris on August 25th. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 88.31.197.167 (talk) 19:52, 8 April 2011 (UTC)
French expatriate/foreign involvement
It is reported tens of thousands of ethnic French, either are expatriates holding dual nationality in other countries (mainly neutral or not involved in the war) and children of French citizens overseas, participated in the Liberation of Paris. One example was Mexican-born Rene Luis Campeon, a lieutanant, was thought as the first French Free Forces person to entered the city of Paris in the Liberation process. Some of the diaspora loyal to their countryment in France came from Australia, Southern Africa and South America. They entered France in secret or in safety by international agreements from Britain although a few came through Switzerland and Spain, then to encountered the civilian Resistance whom were in contact with the exiled Free French. This is alike the numerous stories of French, British and American volunteers on both sides of the Spanish Civil War, especially the British-born George Orwell whom fought for the Spanish Republican side as a devoted socialist will later become a political novelist author. 71.102.26.168 (talk) 03:47, 28 June 2011 (UTC)
American involvement
I couldn't find any source for american direct involvment into this battle. Eisenhower the supreme commander of allied armies was against intervention at that time. French leaders had to disobey to launch this operation. Besides, wikipedia article for Raymond O'barton is considered lacking sources and it doesn't even say his division participated directly to fighting. 4th Infantry Division article says instead that "they gave French forces the first place in the liberation of their capital" which, to me, sounds like an euphemism to say that they let the french do the fighting.
If someone can bring sources please do. Otherwise, with no reliable sources and to prevent further vandalism like EpidemiaCorinthiana edit, removing USA flag from the infobox seems the most indicated. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.66.196.161 (talk) 15:01, 10 March 2013 (UTC)
- I guess you're French? If so, I can appreciate the difficulties in finding sources in another language; but let us give credit where it is due. The following is of import:
Although the Germans had resisted effectively on 24 August, their defenses melted away during the night as Choltitz ordered Aulock to withdraw behind the Seine. General Barton, who had assembled the 4th Division near Arpajon, selected the 12th Infantry--which was closest to Paris and had lost over 1,000 casualties while attached to the 30th Division at Mortain and needed a boost to morale--to lead the division into Paris on 25 August. Motorized, the regiment started to take the road through Athis-Mons and Villeneuve-le-Roi, but gunfire from the east bank of the Seine deflected the movement away from the river. Without encountering resistance, the troops, screened by the 102d Cavalry Group, reached Notre Dame cathedral before noon, 25 August, "the only check . . . being the enormous crowd of Parisians in the streets welcoming the troops." Units of the regiment occupied the railroad stations of Austerlitz, Lyon, and Vincennes, and reconnaissance elements pushed northeast and east to the outskirts of the city. (Map 18)
While American troops secured the eastern half of Paris, the French took the western part. Langlade's command advanced to the Arc de Triomphe, Billotte's to Place du Châtelet, the spearheads of both columns meeting later at Rond Point des Champs Elysées. Dio's troops, split into two task forces, moved to the Ecole Militaire and to the Palais Bourbon. Several sharp engagements took place with Germans entrenched in public buildings, some of them of great historic value--Luxembourg, Quai d'Orsay, Palais Bourbon, Hôtel des Invalides, and Ecole Militaire among others. About two thousand Germans remained in the Bois de Boulogne. To avoid a fanatic last-ditch struggle that might irreparably damage the city, Choltitz' formal surrender was necessary. Though Nordling presented him with an ultimatum from Billotte, Choltitz refused to capitulate.
- Note the 12th Infantry and the 102nd Cavalry were U.S. Army units. This text can be found at http://www.ibiblio.org/hyperwar/USA/USA-E-Breakout/USA-E-Breakout-29.html .
W. B. Wilson (talk) 06:34, 11 March 2013 (UTC)
- "to me, sounds like an euphemism to say that they let the french do the fighting."" The opposite is more nearly true. US units made the liberation possible even in the narrow sense of who was doing the fighting during August (never mind the whole Normandy campaign). The 2eme DB was allowed to enter Paris first because Eisenhower was enough of a diplomat to see that it was necessary. Otherwise US units could easily have entered first. The 2eme DB partied their way into Paris. DMorpheus2 (talk) 18:10, 13 September 2016 (UTC)
- Adding a comment more than two years since last one... It breaks my heart to see how the participation of the 4th US Infantry Division in the liberation of Paris has been practically eliminated, while all the glory has been given to the French 2nd Armored Division. Necessity that liberating Paris be done by the French, because of political implication of a Communist takeover in Paris, and French pride, was finally pounded into Eisenhower's head, who, on August 22 gave the order for Leclerc's division to head for Paris. However, in case things went wrong, the US 4th ID was to be on the right flank of Lecler's division. I have nothing against the French & understand why Paris should have been liberated by French troops... yet, I cannot stand the way the liberation of Paris was attributed only to them while the US 4th ID had reached Notre Dame earlier in the morning. How would have the French *2e DB* ever managed to liberate Paris, even been able to land in France, had not it been incorporated into the US Armed Forces? When Leclerc's 2nd Armored Div landed on 1 August 1944 at Utah Beach, it was part of the XXth Corps that helped them disembark with their (American) equipment onto the beach. Their equipment was American, their clothing was American, their rifles were American, their jeeps, M8 Greyhound armored cars, M4 Sherman tanks were American, their rations were American, even Lecler's Piper Cub was American. They were able to zip thru Normandy because the Americans, British & Canadians had fought hard for nearly two months there. Without the Americans, the French 2nd Armored Division would have never been able to liberate Paris, for the simple reason that, alone, they would not even have been able to land in France. And it was given the go ahead even though US units of the Third Army were much closer to the French capital. It was great that they finally got the green light from Eisenhower to liberate their own capital - and that's the way it had to be - but not at the cost of forgetting or pushing aside the role of the US 4th ID. [1] pp. 606-618
- --Blue Indigo (talk) 20:11, 11 November 2018 (UTC)
- "to me, sounds like an euphemism to say that they let the french do the fighting."" The opposite is more nearly true. US units made the liberation possible even in the narrow sense of who was doing the fighting during August (never mind the whole Normandy campaign). The 2eme DB was allowed to enter Paris first because Eisenhower was enough of a diplomat to see that it was necessary. Otherwise US units could easily have entered first. The 2eme DB partied their way into Paris. DMorpheus2 (talk) 18:10, 13 September 2016 (UTC)
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Edited for grammar
2605:A000:DFC0:5C:6DF5:185B:8D1:2F20 (talk) 20:58, 8 October 2014 (UTC) I spent an hour going through this entry and correcting obvious grammar and spelling errors. I also separated many run-on sentences. I will not remove the marker requesting this type of clean-up unless someone else has checked my work to certify that the task is complete.
German Surrender section
It's utter nonsense. It should describe what happened at the surrender, not be a character assassination of a dead man. I cleaned up some of the ridiculous stuff, but I think it should be rewritten completely. --74.59.112.163 (talk) 05:42, 12 March 2015 (UTC)
Misleading external link
The first item under External Links may once have connected to a French page about the Liberation in Engish, but at present the link redirects to a tourist site. The link is:
- Liberation of Paris – Official French website (in English)
But follow it and it leads you here: http://uk.france.fr/ (or to other language versions of the the same page depending on where in the world you are).
2A02:A03F:1661:2A00:2540:5123:14B0:B27C (talk) 10:58, 17 November 2015 (UTC) John
How about including this video of the Liberation?
I just found this 2016 uploaded video about the liberation of Paris. https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:La_Lib%C3%A9ration_de_Paris,_1944.ogv . How about using it here? --Joobo (talk) 18:33, 16 March 2017 (UTC)
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- Crisco 1492: I'd like to suggest a rewrite of the first sentence. Since a lot of people won't understand or know how to say 2e DB, and since it's unlikely the crowd was limited to Parisians, I propose something more like:
- Crowds line the Champs-Élysées as vehicles of the French Second Armored Division (Deuxième division blindée) roll down the avenue from the Arc de Triomphe toward the Place de la Concorde . . .
- Then at the second mention of the French Second Armored Division, lower down, add the definite article.
- Hope this helps. Awien (talk) 12:58, 13 August 2017 (UTC)
- Done, with some tweaking. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 13:28, 13 August 2017 (UTC)
- Thanks! But two more tweaks? the Place de la Concorde; it ended --> the battle ended (to avoid ambiguity).
- Btw, what time zone are you in these days, Chris? Cheers, Awien (talk) 13:36, 13 August 2017 (UTC)
- Went ahead and made those tweaks. Revert me if there's an issue. Awien (talk) 19:20, 13 August 2017 (UTC)
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- Such precious years! Savour every moment. Awien (talk) 02:07, 14 August 2017 (UTC)
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