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This is an old revision of this page, as edited by Darin Wagner (talk | contribs) at 13:42, 29 July 2011 (Speculation - Heroes articles: Deleted section, as this is pretty old now). The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this revision, which may differ significantly from the current revision.

Good work on the cleaning up the enemies section. Much appreciated. --Chris Griswold 02:17, 10 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

You're welcome. I wanted to do more, but there were time constraints I had to consider. --Darin Wagner 02:06, 11 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

See WP:LEAD about why the environmentally friendly production has to be mentioned in the lead, because it is discussed in the production section. Secondly, per Tony1's advice, one word is preferrable over two: therefore I chose the word exoskeleton over "bony protrusions". Abomination may not exactly be an insect, but then there's no such thing as him anyway. Alientraveller (talk) 08:45, 16 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I accept that you think it's necessary to mention "carbon emissions" in the lead. However, the choice of the word "exoskeleton" is still factually inaccurate, and factual accuracy should trump syllable cadence. The fact that the Abomination isn't real is a cop out and is irrelevent. The creature clearly has skin, veins and muscle over his skeleton, precluding that he has an exoskeleton. I am justified in changing that to "boney protrusions." Darin Wagner (talk) 03:08, 18 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]