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This is an old revision of this page, as edited by FacrFinderW (talk | contribs) at 04:01, 16 December 2024 (Primavera Capital). The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this revision, which may differ significantly from the current revision.

Doctrine

Hello @Imcdc,

Thank you for your proofreading for Doctrine. What would be the points to review (and to remove the banner) ? I tried to be as neutral and factual as possible by listing the legal proceedings and the criticisms, and by being transparent about my situation. I am open to any modifications. Best, Condottiero dei tempi moderni (talk) 08:33, 14 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I will let the community decide. But from my view, unless an employee is notable enough to have his/her own article, usually we just list the highest position like CEO and leave it at that. Also the font of the headings seems off. It should follow the standard font like every other company article. Imcdc Contact 08:39, 14 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for your feedback. You are right, I removed the italics, the paragraph about employees as well as the founders who are not well known enough (at least on the EN Wiki). Condottiero dei tempi moderni (talk) 09:02, 14 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Primavera Capital

Hello @Imcdc,

I had made 2 edits on 'Primavera Capital Group' page with relevant and credible references from 'Thomson Reuters' and 'Business Times'. Links to both references are as below: https://www.reuters.com/article/markets/chinas-primavera-closes-fourth-dollar-fund-at-4-bln-sources-idUSL4N37R0OL/

https://www.businesstimes.com.sg/startups-tech/startups/fashion-retailer-love-bonito-bags-us50m-to-fund-international-expansion


May I please know what was wrong with them? Since they were reverted. Thanks (talk) 09:02, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]