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This is an old revision of this page, as edited by Zzzxxxrrr (talk | contribs) at 04:42, 1 November 2024 (→Deadline5：ZHANG XIAORUI: new section). The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this revision, which may differ significantly from the current revision.

Deadline3:SHENZIHE

Dear Professor: 

Hello. I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about JinChengHua Thank you. SHENZIHE (talk) 02:55, 29 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@SHENZIHE I am afraid I cannot locate your edit in that article. Please show it to me during my office hours or try again. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:56, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I changed it again. Maybe that's okay?JinChengHua SHENZIHE (talk) 05:05, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@SHENZIHE You have added a category, which is fine for an extra credit, for the activity, please show me your edit where you add a reference. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:07, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I changed it again. Maybe that's okay?DaoXiaoMian SHENZIHE (talk) 04:21, 11 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@SHENZIHE Please see here for why your edit was rejected from Chinese Wikipedia (see also Wikipedia:BAIDU) and try again. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:21, 11 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The record of the change was deleted. I added it again in JinCheng SHENZIHE (talk) 13:20, 12 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@SHENZIHE The explanaiton is still there: 回退SHENZIHE（對話）的編輯：百度百科並非可靠來源請避免再度不當引用 撤销已感谢 标签：回退 移动版编辑 移动版网页编辑 高级移动版编辑
Your new edit is not correct, as Wikipedia is not allowed to be a source for itself. Please add a reference to a reliable source (academic paper, book, or reliable newspaper. Hint: not WP:GLOBALTIMES). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:52, 14 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I have re-corrected this incorrect reference here JinCheng SHENZIHE (talk) 02:56, 17 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@SHENZIHE Your second reference here is good, but please remove your first one to Wikipedia, per the explanation here Wikipedia:List of citogenesis incidents Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 02:46, 18 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3: Yujin Jang

Dear Professor I have completed deadline 3 of "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" from the professor.

This is my draft Hongseong at Wikivoyage for main project individually.

Please check, Thanks.Yujin0203 (talk) 07:00, 4 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Yujin0203 Good progress Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:59, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4:HONG HAOTIAN&LI MENGCHEN

Dear Professor.

I am studying “Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis” and “Media Trends and Globalization”.

We are working on two topics,I finished the translation of one of them and this is my sandbox edit!

Please check it out. Thanks! Honghaotian (talk) 04:10, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Honghaotian
Good start.
Please improve the grammar and vocabulary of your translation. Right now it contains too many errors to be published.
Next, please improve your references:
  • Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability On the bright side, you can get extra credit for adding footnotes to the Korean article
  • Please format the references so that they have an English title (in addition to the Chinese), and other information (author, date, publisher).
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 08:15, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
User:Limengchen2777/sandbox#cite note-35 We have changed the sandbox for Chinese to English translation. Do you have any other questions? Honghaotian (talk) 05:46, 18 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Honghaotian Please read my remarks above carefully. You have added English names to sources, but I said they should be "in addition to Chinese" - please restore Chinese name for Chinese sources (English name should be added to the "translated title" parameter - please stop by my office if you don't know how to do it and need a demonstration).
Additionally, much of your content still does not have references and cannot be published (and does not count for course credit). Please add references to all unreferenced content. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:41, 21 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Limengchen2777 Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:41, 21 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
If a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 05:28, 21 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4：CAI ZHIHANG

Dear Professor.

I am studying “Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis” and “Media Trends and Globalization”.

This is my first draft of the sandbox link Caizzz (talk) 06:12, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Caizzz Good start. Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
In some cases you have links to Baidu content rather then Wikipedia - please make sure to fix your links. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 08:20, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
This is my new link Caizzz (talk) 12:30, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Caizzz Good, but please check your links. Your url for reference 1 leads to Chinese Wikipedia, instead of the book in question.
Next, if the source is in Chinese (ex. 李鹏《六四日记》), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:18, 8 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Here is the new link Caizzz (talk) 05:25, 11 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Caizzz Good job adding English titles, but please fix link to Wikipedia in your reference 1, it should link to the book in question. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:24, 11 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Here is the new link Caizzz (talk) 04:54, 14 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Caizzz I have fixed it for you. Please see how it should be done. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:19, 15 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Here is the new link Caizzz (talk) 04:31, 18 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Caizzz Good progress. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced before being published. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
Also, please add links (and Chinese title, if the source is in Chinese) to references 5, 13 and 15. If the reference is not online, please add other information that allow confirmation that the source exist (link to library catalogue entry for the position or such). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:44, 21 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Here is the new link 5，13，15 Annotation has been completed. Caizzz (talk) 04:23, 28 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Caizzz Good. Please replace reference 15 with a better source. Per the discussion and explanation at 1Wikipedia:BAIDU, Baidu is not allowed on Wikipedia (too many errors). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:34, 30 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
For ref 23 - is this a book? Can you add ISBNs to it and other books? Also, if it is in Chinese, it needs a Chinese title, not just English. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:35, 30 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 4: Jeong Aram

Dear Professor.

I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" Among the Deadline 4 task. I did it with Jo Hyeonseong, a member of group. @Jo HyeonSeong

I've done some exercises to add a Director's experience to the sandbox and I've also inserted that into the actual Wikipedia minorities in south korea Please check. Jeong Ahram (talk) 05:59, 11 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jeong Ahram Good. Regarding your ko:한국의 소수민족, please add blue links like in the English article, linking to other important concepts.
If the topic exists in English, but not Korean, please use this tool: ko:틀:임시링크 Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:36, 11 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I've made the modification. 대한민국의 소수주민 Please check. Thank you. Jeong Ahram (talk) 06:04, 18 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Jeong Ahram I do not see any modifications from you. The last time you edited the article was on October 14. All changes since have been done by Korean Wikipedia volunteers. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:46, 21 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I wanted to say that our project '대한민국의 소수주민' was a draft page not a main page in wikipedia. But we requested to move our draft article to a general article.
So, wikipedia accepted our request and moved it to general article.
I wanted to say this. Jeong Ahram (talk) 05:07, 21 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Jeong Ahram Ah, I see, good. Now try to use the ko:틀:임시링크 tool to add more links. If you don't know how to use it, stop by my office and I will demonstrate Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:57, 22 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4: XU YAN

Dear Professor:

I am studying "Media Trends and Globalization".

This is my sandbox link.

Please check it.Thank you. Xuan6699 (talk) 06:47, 15 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Xuan6699 This is a good start, but there are many issues to fix. First, all content (outside a brief plot summary)
that is not referenced cannot be published - you need to find references for This means you need to find references for information in the sections: Broadcast time, Cast list, Original Soundtrack, Differences from the original novel, , and fragments of the Honorary Awards (some have footnotes, but not all).
Second, Wikipedia prefers WP:PROSE to bullet points list. You should remove bullet points in your sections.
Section 'Propaganda' has a strange title. What is it about? The word Propaganda is not mentioned in the body. This reads like some random Wikipedia:TRIVIA
Section 'Differences from the original novel' seems like a case of WP:FANCRUFT and should be removed, unless you can find reliable references for this. Often, minute differences between modern novels/movies/comics are a topic that people talk about on social media, but nowhere else, and as such, they are trivial and not important enough to be discussed in an encyclopedia
Next, if the source is in Chinese (ex. 李鹏《六四日记》), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 02:55, 18 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Dear Professor I have finished most of the translation of the first article, I have completed the Chinese virusediting of Media Trends and Globalization. Please check it.Thank you. WANGYIZHE1124 (talk) 11:35, 15 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@WANGYIZHE1124 Please post your messages in the new sections. Please post your work in your sandbox, not in the main Wikipedia space, for my review. See video guide in our LMS or come to my office if you are unsure how to create your sandbox. Your current work is not good enough for publication in public space - see also messages on your talk page. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:36, 17 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 4&5 : Jeongeun Park

Dear Professor:

I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"

Deadline 4 and 5 tasks: I've done my article "World System theory" in my sandbox. Check the link out, please. Thank you. Parkjeongeun0430 Sandbox

Thank you. Parkjeongeun0430 (talk) 12:52, 16 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Parkjeongeun0430 Good. Once you think the translation is completely done, you can publish your work by moving the draft to the mainspace (see ko:위키백과:문서_이동 on how to do this) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:37, 17 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I moved the my article. Please check. Parkjeongeun0430 (talk) 08:15, 17 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Parkjeongeun0430 This was not done correctly. I do not see any of your edits in the linked page. You should expand that article with your content from 세계 체제론 - 위키백과 (wikipedia.org) . I will also ping @Ykhwong who redirected your page (I see there was some trouble with page moves and redirects). Parkjeongeun0430, please add your content to the existing article - your task is to expand the existing article with content from English Wikipedia, not to create a WP:CONTENTFORK. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 02:59, 18 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
An article titled ko:세계체제론, which corresponds to World-systems theory, already exists on the Korean Wikipedia. However, User:Parkjeongeun0430 has created a duplicate article titled ko:세계 체제론 (note the space in the title). That is why I made ko:세계 체제론 a redirect to ko:세계체제론. He should make changes to ko:세계체제론, not ko:세계 체제론. --ted (talk) 13:48, 18 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Ykhwong I agree. I hope @Parkjeongeun0430 reads our remarks and understands what they need to fix. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:46, 21 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I fixed it. Please check it.
https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%84%B8%EA%B3%84%EC%B2%B4%EC%A0%9C%EB%A1%A0 Parkjeongeun0430 (talk) 08:37, 24 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Parkjeongeun0430 Good, this is the right space. Now please wait and see if Korean reviewers have any comments about the quality of your translation and other issues. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 00:59, 25 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4: XU YAN

Dear Professor:

I am studying "Media Trends and Globalization".

This is my sandbox link.

Please check it.Thank you. Xuan6699 (talk) 10:11, 17 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Xuan6699 I replied above to your earlier message with feedback. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:00, 18 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Progress in translation：SHAO JIANUAN & WANG YIKE

I am studying "Media Trends and Globalization".

Here are two translations of my “Media Trends and Globalization” course:Mass mobilization and 杭州广播电视台. Check the link out, please.

Thank you. Sssnuan (User talk:Sssnuan) and Alexk27 (User talk:Alexk27)19:52, 18 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Alexk27 @Sssnuan
Regarding your Chinese translation, I see some content still needs to be translated. Please let me know when you finish translating all content.
Regarding your English translation, you need to fix a number of issues:
  • If a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it
  • Please use a proper Wikipedia:INFOBOX. Copy one from an article about a similar Chinese TV station, then change the parameters.
  • Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being published, or deleted if it cannot be verified. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
  • Please fix errors in your citations (in red). It seems you have entered data into wrong fields, as well as made other errors (for example your reference #1 has Chinese characters in the data).
  • Next, if the source is in Chinese (ex. 李鹏《六四日记》), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field.
  • If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:51, 21 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5 Ma Chenxiao

Dear professor, I have done the Wikipedia Sandbox editing of Media Trends and Globalization and Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis, here are the links,User:Mcx8202229/sandbox https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Sanmenxiaplease check Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk) 09:18, 19 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Mcx8202229 Good. Regarding your Wikivoyage article, please ask for feedback from experienced Wikivoyage editors, as we practiced in class last week (follow the instructions from here: User:Hanyangprofessor2 – Travel guide at Wikivoyage)
Regarding your Wikipedia translation, please fix the following:
  • Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being published, or deleted if it cannot be verified. See Wikipedia:Verifiability .
  • If a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:55, 21 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

ZHANGBINGYI

Hello, Professor. I am very sorry. I just found out that my blog has not been added and there is no way to publish it. Please invite me again. My email address is z2730151905@163.com.

Thank you!! Zhangzhang111 (talk) 09:36, 19 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Zhangzhang111 Ok Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 02:00, 21 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3:Xu keying

Dear Professor:

I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis"

I completed the sandbox editing and added the reference.Here is the Binzhou#Economy

Please check. Thanks.

Xukeying2022039098 (talk) 04:51, 20 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Xukeying2022039098 Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 02:54, 21 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4：TANG YINI

Dear Professor:

I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki".Here are two translations of my “Media Trends and Globalization” course:"Anarchism in Poland"and“Anarchism in Korea”.

Here's my map extension to learn about "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki"course:HanZhong。

Thank you for your confirmation.

Tyuni06 (talk) 07:56, 20 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Tyuni06 Good. Please note there were concerns raised regarding the quality of the Korean article (see maintenance templates on the talk). Please see in the editing history of the article who added them and ask them if they are resolved in your newest version.
Your Hanzhong article needs a map, climate information with the graph template, and properly formatted listings with GPS coordinates. Right now this is just a start. Please improve it to the standards we learned in class in the last two months. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 02:57, 21 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5(Week 6)-BAILINHAN

Professor I added some content about Wikivoyage, please check it out Bai0926 (talk) 11:24, 20 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Bai0926 Your article needs climate information with the graph template, and properly formatted listings with GPS coordinates. Right now, this is just a start. Please improve it to the standards we learned in class in the last two months Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 02:58, 21 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Professor I added gps and climate and other content, please check it Bai0926 (talk) 08:35, 21 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Bai0926 Good progress. Remember that listings with GPS coordinates are very important to make the article useful (and pretty). Try to add them soon Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:58, 22 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline5-FAN XINRU

Hello professor, I have edited these two articles on Wikipedia a total of 20 times. If possible, please help me check. Thank you very much. Here is the links.1.2. Jzhdylb (talk) 16:11, 20 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jzhdylb Well done, this looks good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 02:59, 21 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline5 LIU ZIFU

Dear professor, I have completed the translation of Wikipedia from English to Chinese.

Please check it. If there is no problem, I will publish it on Wikipedia.

Here is my sandbox links,https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Peter011008/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92

This is the original articleGender inequality in North Korea

Thank you Peter011008 (talk) 06:07, 21 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Peter011008 Good progress!
Regarding your Chinese article (translation), once you think the translation is completely done, you can publish your work by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this). Then we will see if the Chinese reviewers have any comments.
If a term exists in English Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on Chinese Wikipedia, please use this tool zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi to link it. If you need help, I can demonstrate how to use it. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 02:01, 22 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

WANG TAO

Hello Professor, I am very sorry, I just realized that my blog has not been added yet and I cannot post it, please re-invite me, my email :wangtao020626@sina.com Wangtao626 (talk) 03:34, 22 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Wangtao626 Ok, invite sent Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:00, 25 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4:WANG TAO&ZAI WEI

We are studying “Media Trends and Globalization”.

Hello Professor, my group（@ZAIWEI0328)and I have completed deadline 4 please check.

Here is the article translated from Chinese to English：Early buildings of Wuhan University(武汉大学早期建筑)

Have a nice life, thank you. Wangtao626 (talk) 03:47, 22 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Wangtao626 Very good. Some issues to fix:
  • read WP:WTA and consider which words in your article may need removing as promotional (hint: masterpieces, for example)
  • "and are expected to become" - this needs attribution. Who is expecting that? A newspaper? A politician? A professor?
  • why in your infobox "CHINA" is capitalized?
  • Please add references to paragraphs that are missing them, for example first paragraphs of "Building List" and "Construction process". There are several others later on.
  • If a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it. Currently you link to the Chinese Wikipedia in a simpler way that is confusing to readers who may click the links, expecting to go to English article, but will arrive at Chinese
  • If the reference is in Chinese (ex. "城市随笔：珞珈樱花"), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.
  • Also, please ensure all references have filled in metadata - author name, date of publication, title and publisher are very important
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:12, 25 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you professor, we will improve this article Wangtao626 (talk) 17:33, 27 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Progress in translation：白诗棋

I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis".I'm translating the global financial system, please review it.全球金融体系 白诗棋 (talk) 05:28, 22 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@白诗棋 Good progress. If a term exists in English Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on Chinese Wikipedia, please use this tool zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi to link it. If you need help, I can demonstrate how to use it Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:13, 25 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hello professor, the article I previously chose to translate has already been selected by another classmate. This is the article I have re selected, do you think it's okay? Aaiiuuu (talk) 04:17, 25 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
OK, professor. Besides, I'm sorry, but I haven't blogged yet. Could you invite me again? My email address: baishiqi1011@gmail 白诗棋 (talk) 04:30, 25 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hello Professor,
I just realized that my blog has not been added yet and I cannot post it, please re-invite me. My email address:fjy1033151159@sina
Thank you! Aaiiuuu (talk) 05:00, 25 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@白诗棋 @Aaiiuuu Ok, I've invited both of you to the classs blog Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:08, 28 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

ZAIWEI

Hello Professor, I am very sorry, I just realized that my blog has not been added yet and I cannot post it, please re-invite me, my email ：weizai653@gmail ZAIWEI0328 (talk) 16:24, 22 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@ZAIWEI0328 Ok, invite sent Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:14, 25 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4：WANG TAO&ZAI WEI

We are studying “Media Trends and Globalization”.

Hello Professor, me and my group (@ZAIWEI0328) have completed deadline 4, please check.

This is a translation from English to Chinese:World Values Survey（世界价值观调查）, please check.

Have a nice life. Thank you. Wangtao626 (talk) 06:14, 24 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Wangtao626 Very good. Good progress. If you have translated most content, you can publish your article by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:15, 25 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5: HAN YUANYUAN

Dear Professor: I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."

Lesson 1: Media Trends and Globalization: This is the article I edited in the Sandbox.版权审查

Lesson 2: Understanding Small and Big Data through Wikipedia: I have completed most of the editing.Yuzhou

Thank you for your checking.

Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 13:33, 24 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hanyuanyuan613 Good progress. When you have translated most content, you can publish your article by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this)
For your Wikivoyage article, try to add several images illustrating pretty landmarks. For the do section, try adding a subsection on festivals if they exist in that area (see https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Ansan#Festivals ) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:17, 25 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5: HONG HAOTIAN&LI MENGCHEN

Dear Professor: I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."

Understanding Small and Big Data through Wikipedia: We have completed the editing.Putian

Thank you for your checking. Honghaotian (talk) 06:03, 25 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Honghaotian Good progress. Please add the 'understand' section, and fill in the content in 'get around'. For 'do' section, add a subsection about local festivals. Compare how those sections look in Ansan, for example, and read the guide here https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/WV:Sections Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:10, 28 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4：YoonDaeun

Dear professor, I'm taking your course "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."

I left my feedback and suggestions on another student's article.

https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Talk:Hongseong


Thank you for your checking. Ydaeun0306 (talk) 06:42, 25 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Ydaeun0306 Ok Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:12, 28 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5：Hyeonmin Song

Dear Professor

I'm taking 'Media Trends and Globalization' class. I have finished deadline 5, so I leave a link .

Thank you for your checking. SongHyeonmin2020007129 (talk) 12:50, 25 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@SongHyeonmin2020007129 Good. Now you can integrate your content into the ko:페르미 역설 . After that, we will see what the Korean reviewers say about your work. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:14, 28 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

LIU YUNXIANG

Dear professor ，I'm taking 'Media Trends and Globalization' class， My original article is ’Gender inequality in North Korea‘ from English to Chinese ，Can i change my article to ’history of chocolate‘？, Because the previous article still does not allow me to edit, I translated the article on the web page but not allowed me to save it，And there's no record of my editing on the web.

Please check thank you！ 1eleven0086 (talk) 03:27, 26 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@1eleven0086 Yes, you can change your topic. In the future, it is good to make a backup of your work (I recommend working in a wiki sandbox and saving your progress regularly). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:19, 28 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5: ---FAN XINRU

Hello professor, I have edited these two articles on Wikipedia a total of 20 times. If possible, please help me check. Thank you very much. Here is the link.1.2. Jzhdylb (talk) 09:47, 27 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jzhdylb Good job Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:20, 28 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline5:白诗棋

Dear Professor,

I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis." I have finished deadline 5, my article is ready for review.全球金融体系Also, the link to the blog invitation is invalid , can you re-invite me to enter? Email: baishiqi1011@gmail. 白诗棋 (talk) 05:22, 28 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Edit hisrory:https://w.wiki/BjdM 白诗棋 (talk) 01:19, 29 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@白诗棋 Regarding the blog, that email is registered as an author, you just need to log in to the blogger portal.
Regarding your translation, it has some errors due to copying code from English Wikipedia. Your blue links should link to Chinese articles if they exist. If a term exists in English Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on Chinese Wikipedia, please use this tool zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi to link it. If you need help, I can demonstrate how to use it Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:38, 30 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline5 WANGYIZHE

Dear Professor: I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."

https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:WANGYIZHE1124/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92

https://en.m.wikivoyage.org/w/index.php?title=Menghai&action=history

Thank you for your checking WANGYIZHE1124 (talk) 08:25, 28 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@WANGYIZHE1124 Regarding your translation from Chinese to English, please move it from Chinese Wikipedia to English Wikipedia (to your sandbox at English Wikipedia). What is the Chinese name of the article you are translating?
Regarding your Wikivoyage article, it needs much improvement. For starters, you should add more listings to see and do - right now, see just have three, and only one is correctly formatted. You should also add a banner, a climate chart, and expand the understand section, as we learned in class in the last two months. Right now your project is far from ready, and behind most of your collegues. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:44, 30 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
PS. If you forgot how to complete some tasks at Wikivoyage, you could see the list of our exercises we did in class here: User:Hanyangprofessor2 – Travel guide at Wikivoyage Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:45, 30 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline5 - Kim jong min & Kang tae ho

Dear Professor

we're taking 'Media Trends and Globalization' and 'Understanding Small Data and Big Data' classes. @Kim jong min (hanyang) @Kang Taeho

We have finished deadline 5 of 'Media Trends and Globalization' , so here are the links

KO -> ENG Lee Jung-hyo

ENG -> KO Brentford

Thank you for your checking!

Kim jong min (hanyang) (talk) 03:59, 29 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kim jong min (hanyang) Regarding your translation from Korean to English:
  • Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Korean article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being published, or it will be deleted if it cannot be verified. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
  • Next, if the source is in Korean, please use both the Korean and English titles. Use Korean title in the 'title' field (ex. footnote 17 - K리그2 선두 광주FC, 추가시간 4분에 2골 '김포에 2-1' 극적인 역전승), and English in the 'translated title' field ( "K League 2 leader Gwangju FC, dramatic comeback win over Gimpo 2-1 with 2 goals in 4 minutes of added time") .
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:48, 30 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline5 : YANGPEIFU

Dear Professor

I'm taking Media Trends and Globalization class.

I have completed the Chinese to English translation of the Wikipedia article, here is my He Delai please check it out.

Thank you for your checking! Yangpeifu (talk) 04:28, 29 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Yangpeifu Good, but please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
Also, if a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it. If you don't know how to use that tool, come to my office hours and I'll demonstrate. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:50, 30 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline5 : JIA YUAN

Dear Professor: I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki". Here are two translations of my “Media Trends and Globalization” course:Indocentrism，Asiacentrism. Here's my map extension to learn about "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki"course:Shangrao Jiayyyyy (talk) 04:38, 29 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jiayyyyy Good. I see your 亚洲中心主义[编辑 | 编辑源代码] article has a number of issues tagged in the warning box at the top. Please work with editor or editors who added this warning to resolve them. You can identify them by looking at the history of your article, and then you should ask them for explanation if you don't understand the issues mentioned, or asked to check if they have been resolved if you have already tried to address them.
Please translate the short section on China from Indo-centrism from Chinese to English (you will get extra credit for that).
For Shangrao, please add a banner, a climate chart, and more listings. If you forgot how to complete some tasks at Wikivoyage, you could see the list of our exercises we did in class here: User:Hanyangprofessor2 – Travel guide at Wikivoyage Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:53, 30 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline5 :TANG YINI

Dear Professor:

I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki".Here are two translations of my “Media Trends and Globalization” course:"Anarchism in Poland"and“Anarchism in Korea”.

Here's my map extension to learn about "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki"course:HanZhong。

Thank you for your confirmation. Tyuni06 (talk) 05:31, 31 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Tyuni06 Good. I see your translation articles have a number of issues tagged in the warning box at the top, primarily related to the low quality of the translation. Please work with editor or editors who added this warning to resolve them. You can identify them by looking at the history of your article, and then you should ask them for explanation if you don't understand the issues mentioned or asked to check if they have been resolved if you have already tried to address them.
Regarding your Hanzhong article, it is missing a major element: all your entries in see and do should be in a listing format, with GPS coordinates, as we practiced in class on many occasions (if you forgot how to do it, see my during my office hours and I will demonstrate). Also, your see is too short - it should include some of what you list at do. Wuhou Temple is for example listed in both places. Please clean up your work. There are also many other issues; for example, you mention Nanhu Scenic Area in 'get around' but not in see or do. (This is just one of many similar errors). Please copyedit your article carefully. Please make sure to add Chinese names to each location mentioned, as well as an external link (like with Wuhou Temple) confirming that this place really exists and is not an AI hallucination/invention. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 02:08, 1 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]



Deadline5 :SHAO TIANYI&ZHONG QI

Dear professor, We are taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki". We have completed the Wikipedia entry on Chinese superstitions. Please check it. If there is no problem, I will publish it on Wikipedia.

Here is my sandbox links,[[1]]

This is our expanded Wikivoyage entry，[[2]] Thank you ——Yeomll (talk) 15:13, 31 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Yeomll This is a good start, but there is much cleanup needed. Some of your content is still missing citations and cannot be published (For example, in the section 'Characteristics of Chinese superstition' you have references for points 2, 3 and 4, but not for 1 and 5)..
For many other cases you cite a book, but without a page range. Please specify which page numbers or which short range contain information that you are citing for a given sentence.
Next, if the source is in Chinese (ex. 李鹏《六四日记》), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.
I already asked you to do most of this this last month: User_talk:Hanyangprofessor2/Archive_4#Deadline4:SHAO_TIANYI_&ZHONG_QI
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Your Wikivoyage entry is improving nicely. Please expand the climate section (with the graph, as we practiced in class).
Please convert items in do, buy and eat into listings (like in the see section). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 02:15, 1 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline5:WANGRUITONG&LINYUYANG

Dear Professor: I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."Me and my group members LINYUYANG@l01yy11 Lesson 1: "Media Trends and Globalization" This week I finished translating from English to Chinese is the link:Gender pay gap We would like to change the Chinese to English translation of the Wikipedia title here is the link https: https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E5%8C%97%E5%B9%B3%E5%92%8C%E5%B9%B3%E8%A7%A3%E6%94%BE?wprov=sfti1# Lesson 2: "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis" This week I finished the content is the link.: https://zh.wikivoyage.org/wiki/%E8%8D%94%E6%B3%A2 --WANGRUITONG (talk) 15:49, 31 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@WANGRUITONG
I see your work is progressing on zh:性别薪酬差距. Please carefully proofread your work, I see some unfinished parts (English text remaining). If a term exists in English Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on Chinese Wikipedia, please use this tool zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi to link it. If you need help, I can demonstrate how to use it.
Change of topic to zh:北平和平解放 is approved.
Regarding your edits to https://zh.wikivoyage.org/wiki/%E8%8D%94%E6%B3%A2 , this can count for extra credit, but remember that your main project is to improve the English Wikivouyage article, not Chinese Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 02:19, 1 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5: Jeong Aram & Jo HyeonSeong

Dear Professor

I'm taking 'Media Trends and Globalization' class. I have finished deadline 5, so I leave a link (ENG -> KO) @Jeong Ahram @Jo HyeonSeong

Thank you for your checking. Jeong Ahram (talk) 04:12, 1 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5 : Lee jisu

Dear professor

I'm taking 'Media Trends and Globalization' class.

I've completed Deadline 5.

2022년 러시아의 우크라이나 침공과 중국 (ENG->KO)

Please check it.Xisuux (talk) 04:34, 1 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline5：ZHANG XIAORUI

Dear Professor: I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."

Understanding Small and Big Data through Wikipedia: We have completed the editing Mohe

"Media Trends and Globalization": I completed the translation of all my articles in the sandbox User:Zzzxxxrrr/sandbox

Thank you for your checking. Zzzxxxrrr (talk) 04:42, 1 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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