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9 August 2022

• 21:1621:16, 9 August 2022 diff hist +21 Saint Vincent Beer Specify the county, since tons of townships have duplicated names; not doing so is like saying "Greensburg, United States"
• 21:1221:12, 9 August 2022 diff hist +575 Talk:Hurricane Michael →Semi-protected edit request on 9 August 2022: new section
• 21:0921:09, 9 August 2022 diff hist +444 Wikipedia:Articles for creation/Redirects No edit summary

8 August 2022

• 10:2310:23, 8 August 2022 diff hist −3 Ascension of Jesus →Background: Written accounts don't think of things; they say things
• 10:2210:22, 8 August 2022 diff hist −3 Ascension of Jesus →Background: There's a specific term for "gospel authors"

6 August 2022

• 20:5120:51, 6 August 2022 diff hist −104 Hearts in Atlantis (film) →Plot: Concision

5 August 2022

• 21:5921:59, 5 August 2022 diff hist −1,186 Smith Street, Melbourne Spam. That's a minor publication in one language, not a comprehensive survey by a major media outlet or a scholarly survey, and everything else is just reporting about the minor publication Tag: references removed
• 21:5621:56, 5 August 2022 diff hist −113 Collingwood, Victoria →See also: That already has its own section Tag: section blanking
• 08:1408:14, 5 August 2022 diff hist −92 2024 United States Senate elections Concision
• 08:1008:10, 5 August 2022 diff hist +537 Talk:Jackie Walorski →Semi-protected edit request on 5 August 2022: new section
• 08:0608:06, 5 August 2022 diff hist 0 Talk:Hurricane Andrew →Semi-protected edit request on 5 August 2022
• 08:0608:06, 5 August 2022 diff hist +595 Talk:Hurricane Andrew →Semi-protected edit request on 5 August 2022: new section
• 01:1601:16, 5 August 2022 diff hist −3 2021–22 Australian region cyclone season It's over

4 August 2022

• 23:1523:15, 4 August 2022 diff hist −195 Circadian rhythm →Society and culture: WP:SELFREF, "This means that even if an article itself becomes famous, that article should not report this about itself."
• 23:1423:14, 4 August 2022 diff hist −89 Circadian rhythm →Human health: Why did someone think to create subsections with <big> and bold text?
• 23:0823:08, 4 August 2022 diff hist −4 Lamprey →Fossil record: slight tone change
• 23:0323:03, 4 August 2022 diff hist −74 Small intestine →Immunological: Why is that there?

3 August 2022

• 21:0421:04, 3 August 2022 diff hist 0 Jackie Walorski →Personal life and death: Undo a section merger that someone did a little bit ago; it's normal to have these topics as separate sections
• 21:0321:03, 3 August 2022 diff hist −130 Jackie Walorski Revert vandalism Tag: Undo
• 20:5920:59, 3 August 2022 diff hist +705 Wikipedia:Requests for page protection/Increase Requesting protection for Jackie Walorski
• 20:5420:54, 3 August 2022 diff hist −381 Jackie Walorski The introduction is supposed to be a summary of what's given below, and because it's cited down below, citations for the introduction generally aren't needed. See MOS:LS Tag: references removed
• 20:3620:36, 3 August 2022 diff hist 0 Newsboys' strike of 1899 →Strike leaders: Kids? Formal tone, please
• 20:3420:34, 3 August 2022 diff hist −11 Newsboys' strike of 1899 →Causes: This would do well in the previous section

2 August 2022

• 21:3121:31, 2 August 2022 diff hist −9 Reims Cathedral →13th–14th century – the High Gothic cathedral: Obviously that's in 1211
• 20:4820:48, 2 August 2022 diff hist +427 Talk:Ayman al-Zawahiri →Semi-protected edit request on 2 August 2022 (3): Marriages
• 20:4420:44, 2 August 2022 diff hist +604 Talk:Ayman al-Zawahiri →Semi-protected edit request on 2 August 2022 (3): new section
• 20:4220:42, 2 August 2022 diff hist −12 Digital identity in Australia →myGov: better sentence structure
• 20:2520:25, 2 August 2022 diff hist +8 Wikipedia:Graphics Lab/Map workshop →Request
• 20:2520:25, 2 August 2022 diff hist +631 Wikipedia:Graphics Lab/Map workshop →Request: new section
• 20:2220:22, 2 August 2022 diff hist −48 Parking violation →Examples: Similar sentence structure
• 20:2020:20, 2 August 2022 diff hist −8 Parking violation →Europe: Simpler
• 20:1820:18, 2 August 2022 diff hist +1 Parking violation →Examples: like a parking?
• 20:1620:16, 2 August 2022 diff hist −12 Parking violation Extra words

1 August 2022

• 21:2321:23, 1 August 2022 diff hist +45 Robert Epstein →Personal life: Wife's first name, from source, which says they were married "nearly seven years" until late December 2019
• 21:2021:20, 1 August 2022 diff hist −12 Chatbot →Malicious use: Why just a presidential? "Election" is simpler
• 20:5520:55, 1 August 2022 diff hist +518 Wikipedia:Reference desk/Humanities →Unincorporated companies: new section Tag: New topic
• 20:5020:50, 1 August 2022 diff hist +1 General partnership →Separate legal personality: Alphabetical order for countries, with the multi-country line first
• 20:4820:48, 1 August 2022 diff hist +25 General partnership →Characteristics: Links
• 01:5301:53, 1 August 2022 diff hist +46 American and British English spelling differences →Commonwealth usage: Specify that the ALP is a major party; it's not something only specialists have heard of
• 01:4101:41, 1 August 2022 diff hist −7 Victorian Heritage Register →Types of places: Sentence structure was understandable but wrong
• 01:2801:28, 1 August 2022 diff hist +295 Wikipedia:Articles for creation/Redirects No edit summary

31 July 2022

• 22:0422:04, 31 July 2022 diff hist −6 Senate of Canada →Legislative functions: "GST" appears only four times in the article: twice in acronym explanations, and twice in the word "Kingston". No need even to mention the acronym if it's not used by itself
• 22:0122:01, 31 July 2022 diff hist −39 House of Representatives (Japan) That should be obvious from two sentences earlier, which says that there are 465 members

27 July 2022

• 20:3920:39, 27 July 2022 diff hist 0 Assassination of Shinzo Abe →Planning: expand link, so it doesn't look like a link to bomb

26 July 2022

• 20:2520:25, 26 July 2022 diff hist −1 Abuwtiyuw Don't use both BC and BCE in the same article
• 19:1819:18, 26 July 2022 diff hist −2 Federation Drought →Beginnings: Why is that in quotes?
• 19:1619:16, 26 July 2022 diff hist −1 Australian banking crisis of 1893 →Social commentary: Don't nest ' within ' — " within ' or ' within "
• 19:1519:15, 26 July 2022 diff hist +19 Australian banking crisis of 1893 →Social commentary: This sounds like it's talking about 1947, not talking from 1947

25 July 2022

• 21:0821:08, 25 July 2022 diff hist −25 Kumquat →Cultivation and uses: Citation is now present
• 20:3320:33, 25 July 2022 diff hist +2 Hyde Park, London →Concerts: Serial commas are missing here, but other parts of the article use them