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{{u|Risker}}, I'd be glad to go, no complaints...but could you oversight the AN/I post...because it could easily result in my public outing. I will respect your block, please respect my real life privacy.--[[User:ColonelHenry|ColonelHenry]] ([[User talk:ColonelHenry#top|talk]]) 09:16, 21 April 2014 (UTC) |
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[[File:Crying-girl.jpg|thumb|right|If you come to me with this kind of attitude or are having a temper tantrum or hissy fit, go fuck off and cry in the corner...Boo hoo!!!]] |
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== Kirkpatrick Chapel == |
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I reviewed the article, and it looks good. I have three suggested changes. |
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(1) Add alt captions to all the pictures.<br> |
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(2) Wikipedia has an inflation template that many articles use to calculate the real value of money from a particular year. Template:Inflation.<br> |
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(3) The word flow is a bit stilted in the lead sentence. I think you could remove ''known as Kirkpatrick Chapel'' and just refer to it by the shorter name in subsequent sentences. I might replace ''Rutgers, The State University of New Jersey'' with ''Rutgers University.'' If someone hits the link for Rutgers, they'll see the full name. I would add ''is'' before ''located,'' and replace ''New Jersey in the United States.'' with ''New Jersey, United States.'' [[User:DavidinNJ|DavidinNJ]] ([[User talk:DavidinNJ|talk]]) 21:20, 14 November 2013 (UTC) |
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:I'll try to give the article a look-over sometime this weekend as well. At a glance, it looks like you've done a great job. [[User:Neelix|Neelix]] ([[User talk:Neelix|talk]]) 06:13, 15 November 2013 (UTC) |
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::I apologize for taking longer than expected to get around to this review. Overall, this looks like a great article. Here are my recommendations: |
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::#The "History" section should not end with the chapel's construction; the history should run right up until the present. This issue might be rectified by merging the "Use" section into the "History" section. |
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::#The events listed in the "Notable events" section would flow better with the rest of the article if they were presented paragraphically. Also, the word "notable" is superfluous as only notable information should be included in any Wikipedia article. |
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::#The year spans should appear in the body text of the "Use" subsections rather than in the subsection titles. |
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::#The statement that "The chapel is available to students, alumni, and faculty of all faiths, and a variety of services are held throughout the academic term" appears in the lead, but I cannot find it in the body of the article and I therefore do not see the source for this statement. |
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::#Is there any reason that the [[Reformed Church in America]] link is pipelinked with the phrase "Dutch Reformed faith"? There is a difference between the [[Reformed Church in America]] and the [[Dutch Reformed Church]], and both refer to themselves as churches rather than faiths. |
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::#I second David's recommendation above that alt text should be added to the images. |
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::#Paragraphs should consist of more than one sentence each. |
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::I look forward to seeing this article up at FAC. Please let me know when you initiate the candidacy. [[User:Neelix|Neelix]] ([[User talk:Neelix|talk]]) 03:26, 27 November 2013 (UTC) |
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== A mushroom for you == |
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|style="font-size: x-large; padding: 3px 3px 0 3px; height: 1.5em;" | '''A TFA mushroom teaser''' |
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|style="vertical-align: middle; padding: 3px;" | In case you can't wait until the next one... [[User:Bencherlite|Bencherlite]][[User talk:Bencherlite|<i><sup>Talk</sup></i>]] 02:29, 23 January 2014 (UTC) |
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{{u|Bencherlite}} - aww, you sent me a poisonous one. :) --[[User:ColonelHenry|ColonelHenry]] ([[User talk:ColonelHenry#top|talk]]) 02:29, 23 January 2014 (UTC) |
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:Don't eat it all at once, then... [[User:Bencherlite|Bencherlite]][[User talk:Bencherlite|<i><sup>Talk</sup></i>]] 02:34, 23 January 2014 (UTC) |
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:* {{u|Bencherlite}} -- I noticed that you followed my FA at TFA (21JAN14) with a mushroom today (22JAN14). The Russians seeing a coincidence like that would say "Nye sluchaino"...it is not an accident. I'm tempted to agree with the Russian wisdom. lol. --[[User:ColonelHenry|ColonelHenry]] ([[User talk:ColonelHenry#top|talk]]) 02:38, 23 January 2014 (UTC) |
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::*Now you've given me an idea - every TFA of yours will be followed by a mushroom... mwah-ha-ha... [[User:Bencherlite|Bencherlite]][[User talk:Bencherlite|<i><sup>Talk</sup></i>]] 02:47, 23 January 2014 (UTC) |
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:::* {{u|Bencherlite}} - I think I can thwart your Dr.Evil-esque ambition by getting [[Dent corn]] up to FA status...no way you'd follow corn with a 'shroom. --[[User:ColonelHenry|ColonelHenry]] ([[User talk:ColonelHenry#top|talk]]) 02:51, 23 January 2014 (UTC) |
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::::* No, I'd get in there first with a 'shroom then veto dent corn as too similar in subject matter ('''oppose''' - two disgusting things to eat back-to-back) [[User:Bencherlite|Bencherlite]][[User talk:Bencherlite|<i><sup>Talk</sup></i>]] 02:58, 23 January 2014 (UTC) |
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:::::* {{u|Bencherlite}} a clever checkmate. hadn't thought of that.--[[User:ColonelHenry|ColonelHenry]] ([[User talk:ColonelHenry#top|talk]]) 03:05, 23 January 2014 (UTC) |
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== A Poetry Project Barnstar == |
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|style="font-size: x-large; padding: 3px 3px 0 3px; height: 1.5em;" | '''A Poetry Project Barnstar''' |
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|style="vertical-align: middle; padding: 3px;" | For all your recent and ongoing work with [[WP:POETRY]], particularly the project page and timely responses to recent inquiries on the talk page. It is appreciated. --[[User:Midnightdreary|Midnightdreary]] ([[User talk:Midnightdreary|talk]]) 21:33, 21 March 2014 (UTC) |
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* Many thanks, {{u|Midnightdreary}}. --[[User:ColonelHenry|ColonelHenry]] ([[User talk:ColonelHenry#top|talk]]) 22:26, 21 March 2014 (UTC) |
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:: Congrats to Caspersen FA! A poetry question: could you look at [[Herzlich lieb hab ich dich, o Herr]] and say a few words about the rhyme and meter, - I lack the terms. 10 lines, bar form, AAB AAB CCEEFF? (stanza 3, the one I know best, from singing) --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 20:21, 12 April 2014 (UTC) |
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==Lenapehoking== |
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{{Whisperback|mjp1305|Lenapehoking}}--[[User:Mjp1305|Mjp1305]] ([[User talk:Mjp1305|talk]]) 17:54, 1 April 2014 (UTC) |
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== Ping as you are able == |
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Hey ColonelHenry, I think you are the only reviewer who has yet to wrap up your review at my FAC for [[Mucho Macho Man]], I think everyone else caught all the nitpicky stuff, but I would value your input - I'm rather hoping to get it approved before the wikicup round is over (otherwise I'm probably going to be out of the iwkicup, phooey). No worries if you have more critical matters to deal with, but just a ping if you are looking for something relatively easy to do. [[User:Montanabw|<font color="006600">Montanabw</font>]]<sup>[[User talk:Montanabw|(talk)]]</sup> 18:39, 12 April 2014 (UTC) |
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* {{ping|Montanabw}} - I'll finish it up tonight. Sorry for the delay. I'll email you later on when I get it done.--[[User:ColonelHenry|ColonelHenry]] ([[User talk:ColonelHenry#top|talk]]) 18:43, 12 April 2014 (UTC) |
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**You are a wonderful human being! Thank you! [[User:Montanabw|<font color="006600">Montanabw</font>]]<sup>[[User talk:Montanabw|(talk)]]</sup> 18:44, 12 April 2014 (UTC) |
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*** I'm a barely functional drunk--you give me too much credit. But I'll take the compliment :) --[[User:ColonelHenry|ColonelHenry]] ([[User talk:ColonelHenry#top|talk]]) 18:48, 12 April 2014 (UTC) |
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== [[WP:FOUR]] for [[Finn M. W. Caspersen]] == |
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|style="vertical-align: middle; border-top: 1px solid gray;" | Congratulations! You have been awarded the [[Wikipedia:Four Award|Four Award]] for your work from beginning to end on '''[[Finn M. W. Caspersen]]'''. [[User:TonyTheTiger|TonyTheTiger]] <small>([[User talk:TonyTheTiger|T]] / [[Special:Contributions/TonyTheTiger|C]] / [[WP:FOUR]] / [[WP:CHICAGO]] / [[WP:WAWARD]])</small> 23:00, 12 April 2014 (UTC) |
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|}--[[User:TonyTheTiger|TonyTheTiger]] <small>([[User talk:TonyTheTiger|T]] / [[Special:Contributions/TonyTheTiger|C]] / [[WP:FOUR]] / [[WP:CHICAGO]] / [[WP:WAWARD]])</small> 23:00, 12 April 2014 (UTC) |
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== Nice job == |
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|style="vertical-align: top; border-top: 1px solid gray;" | Excellent job on [[Geology Hall]].--[[User:Tomwsulcer|Tomwsulcer]] ([[User talk:Tomwsulcer|talk]]) 08:36, 14 April 2014 (UTC) |
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== What next? == |
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Yes, sir, Colonel Henry. Regarding your tag on [[Metanoia (theology)]], this World War II enlisted veteran readily admits to an overuse of “mistranslation,” and I have removed most of them. You also say that the “article may require cleanup.” |
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Wikipedia forbids use of the OR material I developed for lectures in my teaching years. So, following Wikipedia procedures, I gathered published material before choosing writing style: (1) essay-style writing as I did in [[St Augustine's College, Canterbury]] and [[St Augustine's Abbey]] or (2) a news-report-style organized to inform readers what authorities say about metanoia and its theological use. I tried to do the second with as much clarity and conciseness and as little theological jargon as I was able. Please tell me more specifically what needs to be done. Or, perhaps, the best way is to leave the tag (many articles have them) and hope that “somebody” will work on the article? [[User:Vejlefjord|Vejlefjord]] ([[User talk:Vejlefjord|talk]]) 17:26, 16 April 2014 (UTC) |
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== Blocked == |
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I have explained my reasoning [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia%3AAdministrators%27_noticeboard&diff=605117656&oldid=605098073 here]. If you wish to make a statement, you can post on your talk page. [[User:Risker|Risker]] ([[User talk:Risker|talk]]) 07:43, 21 April 2014 (UTC) |
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Revision as of 09:16, 21 April 2014
Risker, I'd be glad to go, no complaints...but could you oversight the AN/I post...because it could easily result in my public outing. I will respect your block, please respect my real life privacy.--ColonelHenry (talk) 09:16, 21 April 2014 (UTC)