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Also, who divorces whom, and who commits suicide? I took out those sentences as they made no sense, but will put them back in once this is explained. This plot summary is way too long and completely impossible to follow. It should be much, much shorter, with a minimum of detail. A very rough sketch. I suggest you cut out most of it and just give a very simple explanation of the largest points. I can correct grammar, but I can't cut plot elements when I don't know the material and have no idea what is really important and what isn't. Someone has to make some tough choices, otherwise the plot summary is such a nightmare of names and details that it's unreadable. --[[User talk:TEHodson|TEHodson]] 06:33, 21 December 2011 (UTC)
Also, who divorces whom, and who commits suicide? I took out those sentences as they made no sense, but will put them back in once this is explained. This plot summary is way too long and completely impossible to follow. It should be much, much shorter, with a minimum of detail. A very rough sketch. I suggest you cut out most of it and just give a very simple explanation of the largest points. I can correct grammar, but I can't cut plot elements when I don't know the material and have no idea what is really important and what isn't. Someone has to make some tough choices, otherwise the plot summary is such a nightmare of names and details that it's unreadable. --[[User talk:TEHodson|TEHodson]] 06:33, 21 December 2011 (UTC)

:I just spent half an hour editing the plot summary, only to have it all lost when you, neobatfreak, decided to edit the page, too, causing an edit conflict. I'm not doing it again. I asked you to leave notes HERE. It's very poor form to ask for help then go back and mess with the page while that help is being given. I don't understand any of what the plot says, but I had corrected the grammar and reduced some of the length. I may take another look at it later, but I'm done for now.--[[User talk:TEHodson|TEHodson]] 06:41, 21 December 2011 (UTC)

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God, I hate the idea that Cecilia works with Nicky Wu

God, I hate the idea that Cecilia works with Nicky Wu. Why? Because Cecilia has much better chemistry with Yuan Hong onscreen than other actors she'd with in the past.--NeoBatfreak (talk) 04:57, 28 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Startling by Each Step (novel)

Hi, I've made a page for the novel. Please feel free to make contributions.--NeoBatfreak (talk) 17:57, 5 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Need clarification

What does this sentence mean: "In a last-ditch effort to save Yinsi and her friends from their terrible fates, Ruoxi warns Yinsi to be wary of Yinzhen." There hasn't been anything before this that indicates a horrible fate is in store. Does someone know about these fates in advance? Please explain here, on the Talk page, so I can make the plot summary make sense. Thanks.--TEHodson 06:22, 21 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Also, who divorces whom, and who commits suicide? I took out those sentences as they made no sense, but will put them back in once this is explained. This plot summary is way too long and completely impossible to follow. It should be much, much shorter, with a minimum of detail. A very rough sketch. I suggest you cut out most of it and just give a very simple explanation of the largest points. I can correct grammar, but I can't cut plot elements when I don't know the material and have no idea what is really important and what isn't. Someone has to make some tough choices, otherwise the plot summary is such a nightmare of names and details that it's unreadable. --TEHodson 06:33, 21 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I just spent half an hour editing the plot summary, only to have it all lost when you, neobatfreak, decided to edit the page, too, causing an edit conflict. I'm not doing it again. I asked you to leave notes HERE. It's very poor form to ask for help then go back and mess with the page while that help is being given. I don't understand any of what the plot says, but I had corrected the grammar and reduced some of the length. I may take another look at it later, but I'm done for now.--TEHodson 06:41, 21 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]