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Reverting to previous version due to Vandalism.
Reverting to previous version due to Vandalism.

== Improved accuracy ==

Hi, I've changed the sentence about Revelation being 'unique' in producing a high quantity of its own shows by removing the word 'unique' - I haven't suggested that Revelation doesn't produce a lot of its own material, but simply reworded it to take 'unique' out. Previously it was an inaccurate statement, as other channels certainly produce a lot of their own material too (God TV, for example, also "broadcasts a high amount of self-created programming" - even if that is aired alongside a great number of outside shows). Thanks.


== Tried to make this look more 'professional' ==
== Tried to make this look more 'professional' ==

Revision as of 13:53, 4 October 2008

Hang on, this is not NPOV

In the Challenges section someone wrote "It beggars belief that a country like the UK claiming to be the centre-piece of democracy would impose restrictions on religious broadcasting but allows pornographic programs to be aired."

As it happens I completely agree, but phrases like 'beggars belief' would not be found in any ordinary encylopedia. So I will change this!

Reverting to previous version due to Vandalism.

Improved accuracy

Hi, I've changed the sentence about Revelation being 'unique' in producing a high quantity of its own shows by removing the word 'unique' - I haven't suggested that Revelation doesn't produce a lot of its own material, but simply reworded it to take 'unique' out. Previously it was an inaccurate statement, as other channels certainly produce a lot of their own material too (God TV, for example, also "broadcasts a high amount of self-created programming" - even if that is aired alongside a great number of outside shows). Thanks.

Tried to make this look more 'professional'

Hi, I have tried to make the Revelation section look a lot more professional; and would like to thank whomever started this entry, and of course to all positive contributors. Please feel free to discuss any issues here.

Thanks.

davilton 15:38, 8 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks a lot Davilton. I added a bit on the fact that Revelation TV has also included a look into Christian converts who were originally Muslims like Simon Altaf. I thought that part was important since we get to hear a lot about Muslim converts but not of Christian converts from Islam.

Outdated Information

Forgive my being new to Wiki but the information herein was outdated. Perhaps someone could add the tags or whatever is needed to make it up to Wiki standard? OFCOM lifted the restrictions a while back. 12:06, 23 February 2007 (UTC)Halesowen

Weasel words in criticism section

Unhealthy use of language, such as "Some worry that"; i.e. who are "some". Classic "weasel words" case, needs citations and attribution to demonstrate that these aren't just POV snuck in. Fourohfour 14:08, 25 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]