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⚫ | Put your text for the new page here.Hello Birgitte.My name is Sanne Modig,I`m from sweden.I have read the text about you on the `Swedich` tv-text on the mytelevision.I`m 27 years old,almost 28,in the 5`thift of feburary this year.I`m not so good too write in English,but I trye,I`m very intresste in your program,`baby`.................:)I think that very much people have whrite to you and they,want too be on your program.I`m a very sure aboute this.Please send me a messege.I wait for your mail.If you don`t see this soo seriuse,please mail me back so I dont site and wait for your mail,or your anserw.Please,I really want this,so please call me,on [number deleted for privacy reasons] or send me a mail on |
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==Solicitation of Brigitte Boisselier for dating/marriage== |
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⚫ | Put your text for the new page here.Hello Birgitte.My name is Sanne Modig,I`m from sweden.I have read the text about you on the `Swedich` tv-text on the mytelevision.I`m 27 years old,almost 28,in the 5`thift of feburary this year.I`m not so good too write in English,but I trye,I`m very intresste in your program,`baby`.................:)I think that very much people have whrite to you and they,want too be on your program.I`m a very sure aboute this.Please send me a messege.I wait for your mail.If you don`t see this soo seriuse,please mail me back so I dont site and wait for your mail,or your anserw.Please,I really want this,so please call me,on [number deleted for privacy reasons] or send me a mail on [e mail redacted] <small>—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:217.208.150.161|217.208.150.161]] ([[User talk:217.208.150.161|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/217.208.150.161|contribs]]) </small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> |
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:I am sure you can call Brigitte at her day job at [[Clonaid]], loser. you need a [[net dating service]]. <small>—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:142.177.104.158|142.177.104.158]] ([[User talk:142.177.104.158|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/142.177.104.158|contribs]]) </small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> |
:I am sure you can call Brigitte at her day job at [[Clonaid]], loser. you need a [[net dating service]]. <small>—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:142.177.104.158|142.177.104.158]] ([[User talk:142.177.104.158|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/142.177.104.158|contribs]]) </small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> |
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We just use people's names in articles, see [[Albert Einstein]] for example. [[User:TimVickers|Tim Vickers]] ([[User talk:TimVickers|talk]]) 20:09, 24 February 2008 (UTC) |
We just use people's names in articles, see [[Albert Einstein]] for example. [[User:TimVickers|Tim Vickers]] ([[User talk:TimVickers|talk]]) 20:09, 24 February 2008 (UTC) |
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==Recent edits are excellent== |
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We obviously have an [[User:Mark Arsten|expert writer]] fixing up the article on [[Brigitte Boisselier]]. In a mere span of days, this article has moved from a stub to what is clearly is a valid candidate for [[Wikipedia:Good articles|Good article status]]. Wonderful! [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Brigitte_Boisselier&diff=530960304&oldid=445832141 ''(link to recent edits)'']<span style="display:inline-block; margin-bottom:-0.3em; vertical-align:-0.4em; line-height:1.2em; font-size:85%; text-align:right;"><!-- |
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:Thank you very much, I'm glad to hear that you like it. It was a pleasure to research and write! [[User:Mark Arsten|Mark Arsten]] ([[User talk:Mark Arsten|talk]]) 16:22, 3 January 2013 (UTC) |
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Despite previous adulation for the professionalism of the page, it remains bizarre that this person warrants more than a stub. References are difficult to verify (and generally won't be verified by casual users, which is a significant problem), there are patches of subtle editorializing within the article, and ultimately it seems that the only reason that this woman has garnered her own page is that she made several fantastic, unverifiable claims. Clearly not a priority, but take this article with a wheelbarrow of salt.--[[User:Concerned Editor|Concerned Editor]] 01:19 7 October 2014 (UTC) <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/73.188.108.183|73.188.108.183]] ([[User talk:73.188.108.183|talk]]) </span><!-- Template:Unsigned IP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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Photo provided here doesn't look at all like the photos on Google Images, incl. screenshots from C-SPAN. What gives? Time to find a new image? [[User:QueensanditsCrazy|QueensanditsCrazy]] ([[User talk:QueensanditsCrazy|talk]]) 21:37, 27 December 2023 (UTC) |
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Solicitation of Brigitte Boisselier for dating/marriage
[edit]Put your text for the new page here.Hello Birgitte.My name is Sanne Modig,I`m from sweden.I have read the text about you on the `Swedich` tv-text on the mytelevision.I`m 27 years old,almost 28,in the 5`thift of feburary this year.I`m not so good too write in English,but I trye,I`m very intresste in your program,`baby`.................:)I think that very much people have whrite to you and they,want too be on your program.I`m a very sure aboute this.Please send me a messege.I wait for your mail.If you don`t see this soo seriuse,please mail me back so I dont site and wait for your mail,or your anserw.Please,I really want this,so please call me,on [number deleted for privacy reasons] or send me a mail on [e mail redacted] —Preceding unsigned comment added by 217.208.150.161 (talk • contribs)
- I am sure you can call Brigitte at her day job at Clonaid, loser. you need a net dating service. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 142.177.104.158 (talk • contribs)
- Nice. Being nasty isn't necessary. -- Zoe
- Is it a joke??? --noaccount —Preceding unsigned comment added by 90.40.177.216 (talk • contribs)
- I don't blame you, Sanne; she is kind of hot, but I don't think this is an appropriate use of the talk page.--The Fat Man Who Never Came Back 18:38, 7 October 2007 (UTC)
- She's at least 50 years old.Kmarinas86 19:54, 7 October 2007 (UTC)
But what has she done lately?
[edit]Has Boisselier disappeared from the public eye after her announcements a few years ago?--The Fat Man Who Never Came Back 18:38, 7 October 2007 (UTC)
Use of "Dr"
[edit]We just use people's names in articles, see Albert Einstein for example. Tim Vickers (talk) 20:09, 24 February 2008 (UTC)
Recent edits are excellent
[edit]We obviously have an expert writer fixing up the article on Brigitte Boisselier. In a mere span of days, this article has moved from a stub to what is clearly is a valid candidate for Good article status. Wonderful! (link to recent edits)siNkarma86—Expert Sectioneer of Wikipedia
86 = 19+9+14 + karma = 19+9+14 + talk 14:46, 3 January 2013 (UTC)
- Thank you very much, I'm glad to hear that you like it. It was a pleasure to research and write! Mark Arsten (talk) 16:22, 3 January 2013 (UTC)
GA Review
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Reviewer: Midnightblueowl (talk · contribs) 15:33, 10 January 2013 (UTC)
Right, this looks like a very interesting article. I'd be happy to review it for you, Mark! If you have the time or inclination to return the favour, then I have a page awaiting GA review over at Madeline Montalban; no pressure to do so though! Midnightblueowl (talk) 15:33, 10 January 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks for doing the review, I appreciate it. I have a couple reviews in process now, but your article does look pretty interesting, I'll keep that in mind. Mark Arsten (talk) 17:26, 10 January 2013 (UTC)
In the introduction:
- There is a picture of Boisselier, but this is not contained within an infobox. I personally think that these boxes add an aesthetic element to the page, but I'm not sure if there is a strict Wikipolicy insisting that you use one.
- No problem, I added one. Feel free to suggest different fields, that's all I could think of off the top of my head. Mark Arsten (talk) 17:26, 10 January 2013 (UTC)
- "scientist and religious leader" - I don't think any real scientist would refer to themselves purely as a “scientist”, they would use "neurobiologist", "experimental physicist" etc, and we should too. Similarly, it should be specified that she is a Raelist leader here; after all, we would not open the article on Pope Benedict by stating that he is a “religious leader”, we would expressly refer to him as a "Roman Catholic leader".
- Ahh, good point, done. Mark Arsten (talk) 17:26, 10 January 2013 (UTC)
- "a secret lab" - I'd recommend using "laboratory" here, over “lab”. Furthermore, where was this lab; from the preceding sentences, I was under the impression that it was in France, not the U,S,
- Good points, changed. Mark Arsten (talk) 17:26, 10 January 2013 (UTC)
- "the effort received" - how about “project received” ?
- Sounds good, changed. Mark Arsten (talk) 17:26, 10 January 2013 (UTC)
Will get to the next two points later. Mark Arsten (talk) 17:26, 10 January 2013 (UTC)- Ok, I've added archive urls to the links and added in a couple pictures. Unfortunately, I don't believe that there are any free images of Rael accessible. Mark Arsten (talk) 20:22, 10 January 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks Mark, I think that this easily passes GA review; glad to have been of service! Midnightblueowl (talk) 21:47, 10 January 2013 (UTC)
- Ok, I've added archive urls to the links and added in a couple pictures. Unfortunately, I don't believe that there are any free images of Rael accessible. Mark Arsten (talk) 20:22, 10 January 2013 (UTC)
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2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. | I'd have to recommend that the editor responsible for this page uses webcitation (as at Islam: The Untold Story) in order to preserve the sources; otherwise they might end up as dead links, and then the GA status of this page might get revoked. | |
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3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). | ||
4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. | ||
5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | ||
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. | Currently, we have only one image; could we maybe introduce some more, just to add to the pages' aesthetic value. Perhaps one of Rael himself ? | |
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Dead reference links
[edit]Despite previous adulation for the professionalism of the page, it remains bizarre that this person warrants more than a stub. References are difficult to verify (and generally won't be verified by casual users, which is a significant problem), there are patches of subtle editorializing within the article, and ultimately it seems that the only reason that this woman has garnered her own page is that she made several fantastic, unverifiable claims. Clearly not a priority, but take this article with a wheelbarrow of salt.--Concerned Editor 01:19 7 October 2014 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by 73.188.108.183 (talk)
Is this photo accurate?
[edit]Photo provided here doesn't look at all like the photos on Google Images, incl. screenshots from C-SPAN. What gives? Time to find a new image? QueensanditsCrazy (talk) 21:37, 27 December 2023 (UTC)
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